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he came of his own volition this time he was rested and i saw a glimmer of his old humor in his eyes a little put off i played to his mood and the evening went well and you know i felt relieved some what comfortable somehow i guess i am forgiving after all this time you know, don't you i am just that way you know how could i be hating someone long after i forgot to remembered what the hate was about so i forgave again this time

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Date: 2/15/2009 12:37:00 AM
well poetry allows one to learn and accept the different emotions!! it gives us the strength! lovely write... ~ Arany
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Date: 2/8/2009 10:17:00 AM
Glad to hear you have a forgiving heart. Interesting format. Nice message. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Have a good day. Karen
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Date: 2/8/2009 6:32:00 AM
Forgiveness and love...go hand in hand...Very good write.
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Date: 2/8/2009 5:47:00 AM
Janetta - I agree with Sharon - Forgiveness can be a beautiful thing and it's one area that I need to work on - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/8/2009 4:46:00 AM
Forgiveness can be a beautiful thing, especially for the person giving it. Simple but powerful write I can relate to very much. Well expressed. Love, Shar
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