This Time

he came of
his own volition

this time

he was rested
and i saw a
glimmer of
his old humor

in his eyes

a little put off
i played to his
mood and
the evening
went well

and you know

i felt relieved
some what comfortable

somehow

i guess i am
forgiving after
all

this time

you know, don't you
i am just that way
you know

how could i 
be hating someone
long after i forgot
to remembered
what the hate was
about

so i forgave again

this time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 15, 2009 at 12:37 AM
well poetry allows one to learn and accept the different emotions!! it gives us the strength! lovely write... ~ Arany
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February 8, 2009 at 10:17 AM
Glad to hear you have a forgiving heart. Interesting format. Nice message. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Have a good day. Karen
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February 8, 2009 at 6:32 AM
Forgiveness and love...go hand in hand...Very good write.
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February 8, 2009 at 5:47 AM
Janetta - I agree with Sharon - Forgiveness can be a beautiful thing and it's one area that I need to work on - God Bless, MJ
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February 8, 2009 at 4:46 AM
Forgiveness can be a beautiful thing, especially for the person giving it. Simple but powerful write I can relate to very much. Well expressed. Love, Shar
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