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dang, grandma was a real hubba bubba- killer-diller khaki wacky boycrazygirl a spiffy hot damn hoofer during the dark hours of WWII and the devastation followed with unrestrainedjubibilation beat me daddy eight to the bar grandma was a real hubba bubba- franksinatracrooner singing grandma put on her stompers she was a babydoll soppysappysharp a spiffy hot damn hoofer worked in a factory building partsforairplanes for the boys no siree bob she was not giving up her job she had dreams a white picket fence in the boondocks grandma was- a spiffy hot damn hoofer no gobbledygook she told great stories of what it was like after the war forthetroops and all pin-up girls like Marilyn Munroe Elvis Roy Orbison Jerry Lee Lewis drive-ins fancy wheels ovaltine casablanca goingmyway its a wonderful life for whom the bell tolls earnesthemmingway it was a time of attitude no fuddy-duddy she had the gams met grandpa doingtheswing they had no lettuce moolah greenbacks but they were over the top stuck on glued bonkers in love oh grandma had no fear of saying hi-de-ho he said hey sugar are you rationed dang grandma was a real hubba bubba- killer-diller kacky wacky boycrazygirl take a gander withyourpeepers at this thingamabob poem ____________________________________ June 2, 2015 Free Verse Inspired by the slang of the 1940's For the contest, Talk the Talk and Walk the Walk, sponsor, Debbie Guzzi First Place

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Date: 6/26/2015 6:48:00 PM
SO much fun to read, Constance! Congrats on your first place win...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 6/26/2015 7:03:00 AM
So fun Constance so original! UNIQUE! Congrads on your #1 win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/25/2015 11:56:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations ... LOVE LINDA
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Date: 6/25/2015 11:37:00 PM
I'm glad to see this one on DG's list. SKAT
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Date: 6/25/2015 10:45:00 PM
Wow a great write Broken wings!Perfect to the theme for a top place win! Big congrats!
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Date: 6/5/2015 3:49:00 PM
Great flow to this one..I am familiar with a few of these and others just don't have a clue..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 6/6/2015 1:15:00 AM
Sort of need the 1940 slang dictionary to figure out! !!
Date: 6/4/2015 12:14:00 PM
Wow, love this Broken! You did such a great job with the 1940's slang and telling us about your dear grandma! It's definitely a winner for me! Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/3/2015 8:40:00 AM
WOW. My tongue was tripping all by itself...haha. Impressive, Broken, just like this real hubba bubba grandma. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 6/3/2015 5:18:00 AM
- A great "word play" in your poem, B.W. ..... "Grandma was a real hubba bubba" ..... sounds like a fun grandma :))) - I wish you a wonderful day - Luck in contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/3/2015 4:59:00 AM
clever & interesting write, my friend - have sooo much catching up to do, so forgive my only reading a couple of your poems today
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Date: 6/2/2015 10:58:00 PM
Excellent. Interesting write. Beautifully penned. Enjoyed. tfs
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Date: 6/2/2015 10:45:00 PM
LOL, Broken.... I much enjoyed this poem. I'm on my way to check DG's contest out. HUGS
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Date: 6/2/2015 9:03:00 PM
An entertaining write, Constance! This should do well in Debbie's contest, as your lingo appears spot on. Best wishes! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/2/2015 6:07:00 PM
Oh this was awesome tripping over my tongue as I read it, what fun!
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