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This Rut Called Life

I am stuck in this rut called life Not going anywhere People around me move forward While I'm mired in despair It's like swimming in a fish tank Or walking in a cage Where the only thing that's moving is my increasing age It's like running on a treadmill In circles, going round Weary of waiting and waiting No change, no purpose found I am caught in a strange quagmire Not sinking in the slush Nor coming out of this quicksand Life is in no great rush I am stuck in this rut called life How longer should I wait? Sometimes no answer is in sight No rescue from this strait. 3rd April 2023 111 words For Sotto poet's "Free submission" contest

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Date: 4/8/2023 5:48:00 AM
BIG congrats on your win, Jo. A genuine verse on life that everyone can relate to.
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Date: 4/8/2023 4:35:00 AM
Sometimes life may appear as a quandary ! The agony of existence is powerfully brought out ! Congratulations Joanna on your win.
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Date: 4/8/2023 2:09:00 AM
- Life : "It's like running on a treadmill" - Congratulations on your win, Jo - hugs
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Date: 4/7/2023 11:50:00 PM
I think we can all relate to your poem Jo. Congratulations for your win in the contest
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Date: 4/4/2023 7:10:00 AM
Regardless of how you were feeling, Joanna. You have written a very good poem which most will relate to. Be well. It gets better:)
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Date: 4/3/2023 6:28:00 AM
ah, the recurring conundrum of the Goose In The Bottle.....
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Date: 4/3/2023 5:53:00 AM
Hi Jo, All can relate to your poem, we all feel like this from time to time. But when one thinks about the goodness of God , that feeling well pass. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/3/2023 5:27:00 AM
We all feel like this on some days, then soul’s innate vibrancy and zest for life takes over!
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