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This Richer Wine of Green

A lass thus dressed half-brash with gown that touched The edges of my seeing eye ablush. This richer wine of green, bedeviled beast — Yes, all her fault unraveled tongue, my speech. An inch of time opened the myriad Of seasons...the best of solar systems — The creaking door alarming with her eyes. Divine, this emerald city. I’m lost Between her thighs (she knows not yet). Those eyes! Oh lovely catlike eyes - the crescent gems Beguile this slave. Her gown with chains of green. Hark all! Look away men...her curls do hiss. Like a seaman at siren’s call, there’s fear — But no recall of land nor maiden’s face. The ghostlike mist of Northern lights, her hem. I’m stitched just right, a ratchet gear of knees. 12/7/2019 Green Dress Poetry Contest Sponsor: Julia Ward 10 syllables each line Most in Iambic Pentameter

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Date: 12/9/2019 12:15:00 PM
A gorgeous write! Wonderful job, my friend!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2019 7:27:00 PM
Thanks so much! Hugs-a-bunch!
Date: 12/8/2019 1:47:00 AM
A beautiful entry for the contest.. Best wishes..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2019 6:41:00 AM
Thank you, Jenish!
Date: 12/7/2019 6:02:00 PM
Hi Kim when you write it like this your sure to get 1st place. Best in this category I have seen. Bravo. Thanks for sharing. I would say best of luck but apparently you dont need any :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2019 6:14:00 PM
We will see! Thanks for the vote of confidence, my friend!

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