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This Rhyme

There is this rhyme I've had for some time Bouncing around in my head And just when I Think it's ready for flight It buries itself instead Running this course Of back and forth Often thought but never seen Like the words to a song Forgot long ago Only humming the melody I think over time It's added words to it rhyme Expanding what it has to say But what good does it do When it never let's loose Enough to see the light of day Only giving a taste Of what it has to say Never taking that final step As my guess is this rhyme Will stay for some time Bouncing around in my head

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Date: 8/24/2017 9:52:00 AM
Interesting Mike. Keep on writing ! We enjoy the poems that may even bounce around in your head :)
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Date: 8/24/2017 9:44:00 AM
Great creative catchy rhyme Mike!~Che :)
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Date: 8/24/2017 8:12:00 AM
It should stay in your head because it's very catchy. Good write, Mike.
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