This Reality

I can`t recognize
this slimy, opaque reality…
wait, I forgot to clean my glasses
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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June 27, 2015 at 1:56 AM
Septimiu, Congratulations on having your poem featured this past week. SKAT love
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June 27, 2015 at 10:35 AM
thanks :))). Septimiu.
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June 23, 2015 at 10:48 AM
Cleaning glasses might not help. Good stuff. Congrats on the selection. daver
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June 25, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Conga rats! :))) thanks.
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June 15, 2015 at 2:57 PM
Wow, this is a good one!! I just love the twist at the end. Very clever!!!!
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June 25, 2015 at 10:24 AM
thanks casarah!
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June 4, 2015 at 11:38 PM
Septimiu, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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June 1, 2015 at 11:37 PM
Septimiu, lol,,,, I got fog on my glasses as well, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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June 2, 2015 at 1:25 PM
So, hi, I am romanian, I live in a beautiful city, in Transilvania, we call it Ardeal, in Cluj-Napoca district, I wrote for 2 years, I published in some romanian magazines and I published a book of poetry who was long listed at many romanian prizes. I write haiku because I have exams( three weeks from now, yes, I`m still student) and they relax me. I published some haikus in english magazines, one of them will be included in a collective book and considerated for a prize. This was little. Toate urarile de bine( is a way to say goodbye in romanian)
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