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This Poem Rose - Mr

There is someone who's placed a rose, The rose inside my heart, My love for him blossoms and grows, For he's so sweet and smart, Each day he tries out antics new To gain our attention, With him around, one can't be blue, His love's no pretension, This rose within my heart's for him, Blooming brighter each day, He makes me laugh when I am grim, And troubles melt away, He was little, but now grown tall, Never knew how time flew, For him, this poem rose, I scrawl, For my loving nephew.
24th March 2023 "The rose inside my heart" contest Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 3/29/2023 4:49:00 PM
Joana, you brought me along in this piece, with a lovely discovery. It's awesome the way excitement you felt was transmit to my mind...amazing.
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Date: 3/24/2023 11:26:00 PM
Very nicely penned flowing and emotional poem. Good luck, Joanna.
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Date: 3/24/2023 12:28:00 PM
Aww so sweet.
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Date: 3/24/2023 9:15:00 AM
It is marvelous to have someone feel the pond of our heart with love for we would never get thirsty. I understand how you feel. May you both be blessed! Wonderfully written!
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Date: 3/24/2023 7:00:00 AM
Well written, Joanna. It's great that you have someone like that in your life (if true). It's crazy, we personalize the poems we write and readers think every one is true. Good luck girl:)
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Date: 3/24/2023 8:11:00 AM
This is really about my nephew, DT:) thanks for your comment:)

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