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THIS POEM REALLY SUCKS

Mummy Dummy
11~07~14 Sponsor Jerry T Curtis This Poem really S****s Thanks for my first ever negative comment That is terrible.... J/K ....hugs Tim

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Date: 1/12/2015 10:19:00 PM
No way Jose, this rocks! love Shane
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Shane Cooper
Date: 1/13/2015 1:12:00 AM
I saw how many you have written. I read them all this afternoon as well as some by others, i was research to try and write something in response to this, it really is good love Shane xxx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/13/2015 1:08:00 AM
This form is a footle Shane I love these poems - so few words can say so much:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/3/2014 3:12:00 PM
Congrats Jan ...It still sucks as opposed to Maurice's ex-wife....hugs Tim
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/3/2014 3:16:00 PM
thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 12/1/2014 8:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, you have to go back 5 pages to find the results of this contest. That's the difference between this poem and my ex- wife...this poem sucks. Now I have to fave it.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/1/2014 11:10:00 AM
lol Maurice:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 11/9/2014 5:14:00 PM
I've just thrown my Footles out of the Pram. For what I've written, has been undone = haha - I love it Jan. No work tomorrow and a koolio Footle, yep, it doesn't get better than that :) xxxx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/9/2014 5:22:00 PM
We should do a few footles together James - I do love the simplicity yet impact of their short form:-) I don't have a poem with negative comments James so just wrote this for fun for the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/9/2014 3:09:00 PM
lol, had a chuckle here - love your sense of humour. Sure, feel free to post the poem, my friend
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/9/2014 3:12:00 PM
Thanks so much Jack - I need to find out how to do it - we have a new system at work! Hugs jan xxx
Date: 11/9/2014 1:54:00 PM
- SSS****SSS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :))))
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Sunshine Smile
Date: 11/9/2014 1:58:00 PM
- Yes, I know my friend :))) - my comments too :))))
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/9/2014 1:56:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise its just a fun write:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/9/2014 10:18:00 AM
mine is worse... i like this though, jan...huggs
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/9/2014 11:43:00 AM
Thanks Nette I just did it for fun really:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/8/2014 7:12:00 PM
Can't be found hidden in my old posts.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/9/2014 11:42:00 AM
It must have been a bad dream Maurice:-) hugs jan x
Date: 11/8/2014 6:44:00 PM
I had a poem with hundreds of views and zero comments. I entered that in the contest. People are not allowed to be mean here so no comment means bad. I intend to win. I think it is just as hard to write a really bad poem as a really good one. Only mediocre is easy.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/8/2014 7:00:00 PM
I will go comment on it Maurice because I know you can't write a bad one in my eyes:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/8/2014 6:21:00 PM
Oh Jan where has your muse gone, at least it rhymes, take care my friend....Vera.........
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/8/2014 6:41:00 PM
lol thanks Vera my muse had blown a fuse and done a runner - what a bummer lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/8/2014 4:25:00 PM
How about..."This Poem Really Sucks"...Hoover...Mover!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/8/2014 5:53:00 PM
LOL I like that one Maurice you should post it lol:-) hugs jan x
Date: 11/8/2014 4:22:00 PM
I came back again. Still nothing. How does a guy get his rocks off with all this false advertising. You should of called it blue balls. In fact with that title you might win. Truth in advertising! Never mind, Scotland Yard would be after you.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/8/2014 5:52:00 PM
LOL Maurice - I hope I don't get place becasue it would mean it was REALLY bad lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 11/8/2014 4:07:00 PM
Jan, you hit three birds with one stone: the title...the content...the reaction!!! Let the judge decide:) hugs // paul
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/8/2014 5:51:00 PM
It's simply a bit of fun - maybe at my own expense lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 11/8/2014 2:18:00 PM
With that title; I had to read it. Yep! Nicely summed.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/8/2014 5:50:00 PM
Thanks ML :-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/8/2014 10:51:00 AM
you got it nailed Jan gl in contest hugs
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/8/2014 11:13:00 AM
Thanks Shadow I just wrote this one for fun I don't expect to get anywhere in the contest lol Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/8/2014 8:27:00 AM
A footle? I've never written one, Jan, so I'll have to read up on the form and try to write one. Sounds like fun! But negative comments, Wow! I'd have to develop a thicker skin. Blessings, Darlene
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/8/2014 11:11:00 AM
Oh I love the footles Darlene they are so simple 2 syllables each word that rhyme - we have had lots of fun with them quite recently:-) Hugs jan x
Date: 11/8/2014 7:05:00 AM
Well, if written by a teenager it would be understandable..Ha!!Ha!!!..Or if written by someone who loves the new craze of "The Walking Dead" or movies where the mummy comes back to life..Good thought for the contest though..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/8/2014 8:06:00 AM
Everyone has an opinion...It is an okay Footle to me..I won't say that it is bad..Sara
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/8/2014 7:07:00 AM
Thanks Sara - I just wanted a poem for the contest - I'm happy to say I've not had negative comments on my poems ... or are people just being kind and I need to start reading between the lines lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 11/8/2014 3:23:00 AM
Oh Jan cud u not be yet more precise ? GL in contest dear!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/8/2014 3:33:00 AM
I could always do another one on the virtues of being a dumb mum - I can ask my son!!!! lol:-) hugs jan x
Date: 11/7/2014 10:19:00 PM
hahahaha.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/8/2014 3:18:00 AM
You're NOT meant to laugh Andrea cos the poem sucks lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/7/2014 7:58:00 PM
First of all a poem that could do that for a guy (and yes I am referring to the promise of pleasure in the title) has got to be good. Secondly, there is a kumbaya type of meld in the words "mummy dummy". I'm sorry Jan, you blew it with this one. It is really good. Kiss this contest goodbye or enter something else. I know cut and paste one of mine. Guaranteed a first place win in this contest.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/8/2014 3:18:00 AM
LOL you always make me smile Maurice - I have never had any really negative comment just a couple of nasty ones aimed at women and I ignored them:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/7/2014 7:56:00 PM
Much wisdom here -- just kidding!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/8/2014 3:15:00 AM
lol thanks David:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/7/2014 7:28:00 PM
this poem really sucks :) have a great weekend Jan
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/7/2014 7:36:00 PM
Thanks Jasmine:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/7/2014 7:26:00 PM
: )..Yes it sucks like a dummy.being sucked..lol : ) ' ) : )
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/7/2014 7:36:00 PM
Exactly Charmaine or like the mum being used as a dummy lol :-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/7/2014 5:41:00 PM
This one sucks Jan!! Good Luck in the Contest!! Cheers, Gary
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/7/2014 5:42:00 PM
thanks Gary i thought it was bad too:-( Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/7/2014 4:24:00 PM
That is terrible.... J/K ....hugs Tim
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/7/2014 4:59:00 PM
So Vienna's are awesome and mine aren't wahhhhhhhhhhh :-( Jan no hugs no kisses :-(
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/7/2014 4:29:00 PM
:-( -cheers Tim:-( hugs Jan x