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This Poem Really Sucks

Mummy
Dummy


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Sponsor Jerry T Curtis
This Poem really S****s

Thanks for my first ever negative comment 

That is terrible.... J/K ....hugs Tim

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2014

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January 12, 2015 at 10:19 PM

No way Jose, this rocks! love Shane

January 13, 2015 at 1:12 AM

I saw how many you have written. I read them all this afternoon as well as some by others, i was research to try and write something in response to this, it really is good love Shane xxx

January 13, 2015 at 1:08 AM

This form is a footle Shane I love these poems - so few words can say so much:-) Hugs Jan xx

December 3, 2014 at 3:12 PM

Congrats Jan ...It still sucks as opposed to Maurice's ex-wife....hugs Tim

December 3, 2014 at 3:16 PM

thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan x

December 1, 2014 at 8:41 AM

Congratulations on your win, you have to go back 5 pages to find the results of this contest. That's the difference between this poem and my ex- wife...this poem sucks. Now I have to fave it.

December 1, 2014 at 11:10 AM

lol Maurice:-) Hugs Jan x

November 9, 2014 at 5:14 PM

I've just thrown my Footles out of the Pram. For what I've written, has been undone = haha - I love it Jan. No work tomorrow and a koolio Footle, yep, it doesn't get better than that :) xxxx

November 9, 2014 at 5:22 PM

We should do a few footles together James - I do love the simplicity yet impact of their short form:-) I don't have a poem with negative comments James so just wrote this for fun for the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

November 9, 2014 at 3:09 PM

lol, had a chuckle here - love your sense of humour. Sure, feel free to post the poem, my friend

November 9, 2014 at 3:12 PM

Thanks so much Jack - I need to find out how to do it - we have a new system at work! Hugs jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 9, 2014 at 1:54 PM

- SSS****SSS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :))))

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 9, 2014 at 1:58 PM

- Yes, I know my friend :))) - my comments too :))))

November 9, 2014 at 1:56 PM

Thanks Anne Lise its just a fun write:-) hugs Jan xx

November 9, 2014 at 10:18 AM

mine is worse... i like this though, jan...huggs

November 9, 2014 at 11:43 AM

Thanks Nette I just did it for fun really:-) Hugs jan xx

November 8, 2014 at 7:12 PM

Can't be found hidden in my old posts.

November 9, 2014 at 11:42 AM

It must have been a bad dream Maurice:-) hugs jan x

November 8, 2014 at 6:44 PM

I had a poem with hundreds of views and zero comments. I entered that in the contest. People are not allowed to be mean here so no comment means bad. I intend to win. I think it is just as hard to write a really bad poem as a really good one. Only mediocre is easy.

November 8, 2014 at 7:00 PM

I will go comment on it Maurice because I know you can't write a bad one in my eyes:-) hugs jan xx

November 8, 2014 at 6:21 PM

Oh Jan where has your muse gone, at least it rhymes, take care my friend....Vera.........

November 8, 2014 at 6:41 PM

lol thanks Vera my muse had blown a fuse and done a runner - what a bummer lol:-) hugs jan xx

November 8, 2014 at 4:25 PM

How about..."This Poem Really Sucks"...Hoover...Mover!

November 8, 2014 at 5:53 PM

LOL I like that one Maurice you should post it lol:-) hugs jan x

November 8, 2014 at 4:22 PM

I came back again. Still nothing. How does a guy get his rocks off with all this false advertising. You should of called it blue balls. In fact with that title you might win. Truth in advertising! Never mind, Scotland Yard would be after you.

November 8, 2014 at 5:52 PM

LOL Maurice - I hope I don't get place becasue it would mean it was REALLY bad lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx

November 8, 2014 at 4:07 PM

Jan, you hit three birds with one stone: the title...the content...the reaction!!! Let the judge decide:) hugs // paul

November 8, 2014 at 5:51 PM

It's simply a bit of fun - maybe at my own expense lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx

November 8, 2014 at 2:18 PM

With that title; I had to read it. Yep! Nicely summed.

November 8, 2014 at 5:50 PM

Thanks ML :-) Hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

November 8, 2014 at 10:51 AM

you got it nailed Jan gl in contest hugs

November 8, 2014 at 11:13 AM

Thanks Shadow I just wrote this one for fun I don't expect to get anywhere in the contest lol Hugs jan xx

Darlene Gifford

November 8, 2014 at 8:27 AM

A footle? I've never written one, Jan, so I'll have to read up on the form and try to write one. Sounds like fun! But negative comments, Wow! I'd have to develop a thicker skin. Blessings, Darlene

November 8, 2014 at 11:11 AM

Oh I love the footles Darlene they are so simple 2 syllables each word that rhyme - we have had lots of fun with them quite recently:-) Hugs jan x

November 8, 2014 at 7:05 AM

Well, if written by a teenager it would be understandable..Ha!!Ha!!!..Or if written by someone who loves the new craze of "The Walking Dead" or movies where the mummy comes back to life..Good thought for the contest though..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

November 8, 2014 at 8:06 AM

Everyone has an opinion...It is an okay Footle to me..I won't say that it is bad..Sara

November 8, 2014 at 7:07 AM

Thanks Sara - I just wanted a poem for the contest - I'm happy to say I've not had negative comments on my poems ... or are people just being kind and I need to start reading between the lines lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

November 8, 2014 at 3:23 AM

Oh Jan cud u not be yet more precise ? GL in contest dear!

November 8, 2014 at 3:33 AM

I could always do another one on the virtues of being a dumb mum - I can ask my son!!!! lol:-) hugs jan x

Andrea Dietrich

November 7, 2014 at 10:19 PM

hahahaha.

November 8, 2014 at 3:18 AM

You're NOT meant to laugh Andrea cos the poem sucks lol:-) Hugs jan xx

November 7, 2014 at 7:58 PM

First of all a poem that could do that for a guy (and yes I am referring to the promise of pleasure in the title) has got to be good. Secondly, there is a kumbaya type of meld in the words "mummy dummy". I'm sorry Jan, you blew it with this one. It is really good. Kiss this contest goodbye or enter something else. I know cut and paste one of mine. Guaranteed a first place win in this contest.

November 8, 2014 at 3:18 AM

LOL you always make me smile Maurice - I have never had any really negative comment just a couple of nasty ones aimed at women and I ignored them:-) Hugs Jan xx

November 7, 2014 at 7:56 PM

Much wisdom here -- just kidding!!

November 8, 2014 at 3:15 AM

lol thanks David:-) Hugs Jan xx

November 7, 2014 at 7:28 PM

this poem really sucks :) have a great weekend Jan

November 7, 2014 at 7:36 PM

Thanks Jasmine:-) Hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

November 7, 2014 at 7:26 PM

: )..Yes it sucks like a dummy.being sucked..lol : ) ' ) : )

November 7, 2014 at 7:36 PM

Exactly Charmaine or like the mum being used as a dummy lol :-) hugs jan xx

November 7, 2014 at 5:41 PM

This one sucks Jan!! Good Luck in the Contest!! Cheers, Gary

November 7, 2014 at 5:42 PM

thanks Gary i thought it was bad too:-( Hugs jan xx

November 7, 2014 at 4:24 PM

That is terrible.... J/K ....hugs Tim

November 7, 2014 at 4:59 PM

So Vienna's are awesome and mine aren't wahhhhhhhhhhh :-( Jan no hugs no kisses :-(

November 7, 2014 at 4:29 PM

:-( -cheers Tim:-( hugs Jan x

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