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This Place (Haiku)

(Paint me a picture with your words) Clear rivers of life will flow through this handsome place Colored with true love © Adell Foster

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/6/2011 4:20:00 PM
Good one..I am glad that I chose this one ro read this eve..Very expressive and descriptive..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits..Sara
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Date: 1/30/2010 1:44:00 PM
What an uplifting view. I always have loved being by the river so I can relate to your wrods. Enjoyed this one. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 10/19/2009 12:46:00 AM
Goood imagery Adell.Rgds Brian & thank you for your kind words today.
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Date: 8/10/2009 5:59:00 PM
This is....alive and fresh. Made my heart smile. Love, Sara:)
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Date: 7/24/2009 3:54:00 PM
Lovely feeling of home....a lovely haiku!!
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