Timothy Carter Poet Personification

This Pillow

THIS PILLOW
 Oh my Lord how wonderful this feels,
It's so good from head to my heels.
  Such a joy to be able to get my rest,
I'm telling you, friend, this is the best.
  You'll never find a Pillow like this,
I have searched they just don't exist. 
 To hug and squeeze it like no other,
you can almost imagine it your lover.
  This Pillow is a must if you want to sleep,
In a Dreamy restful slumber so very deep.
  Get one I say get one this very day,
You'll be so glad for every dollar paid.
  So please if you're not resting very well,
Buy this Pillow It's one I'm proud to sell.
TAC

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Gregory Richard Barden March 23, 2018 at 7:52 PM Congratulations on your win, Timothy - keep up the great work! :-)

Viv Wigley March 21, 2018 at 2:38 AM Congrats, Timothy, well done! Regards, Viv

Roy Pett March 20, 2018 at 11:25 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Timothy with your great poem, a joy to read. :))

Jan Allison March 20, 2018 at 10:29 AM Very creative Timothy:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier March 20, 2018 at 8:41 AM Well done, Timothy. Congrats on your win.

Eve Roper March 20, 2018 at 12:15 AM Awesome win!!!Congratulations on creative verse ....