This Perfect Spot

There's a perfect spot
Just a climb from the beach
Its my desire to be there
With my blond haired peach

It's secluded and private
Is this rocky edge
Where our love of tomorrow
To her I will pledge

We will lie on our backs
Our eyes caressing the sky
Watching cotton wool clouds
Floating gently by

We will close our eyes
Open our ears to the sounds
Of natures orchestra
In symphony surround

The sun will beat down
On us two naked souls
For soon we'll be one
Is our perfect spot goal

We turn to each other
As our lips gently meet
Undulations, discovering
Our sugary sweet

We mimic the waves
As they pleasure the shore
Voicing in sync
Echoing their roar

With the cooling breeze
Serenading our skin
As we unite our love
To each other, from within
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Freeman Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 6:53 AM
Nice flow as the waves of the ocean James. A nicely flowing Quatrain. Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 6:18 AM
Very passionate write on this day in Spring...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
Fone Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 5:34 AM
A very descriptive piece James, well written!
Mehta Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 4:02 AM
You make me feel of the perfect spot,
Hilliker Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 4:40 PM
You make me want to find a wonderful spot too. :-) Great write Highlander!
A   Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 4:35 PM
a wonderful spot James, enjoyed,..p.d
Budd Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 4:06 PM
This is beautiful, I love all the imagery. Fantastic romantic write.
Slode  Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 2:59 PM
sounds like a great spot! very calming and relaxing read
Devonshire Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 2:17 PM
Beautiful images of lovers at the shore, James. Very nice flow and a romantic treat for the reader! Best always, Carolyn
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