This Pain I Obsure

No one can see the pain obscured in my bright eyes. Sad how nobody can tell that I'm
hiding it. Maybe no one care maybe they are too scared to ask.. either way there's no way
anyone can help or stop it. Yeah I seem like a normal girl but I'm definatley not.. not
really anyone knows the real me. I hardly talk, I dress weird, I get called "screamo" I
don't listen to pop like all the other girls, instead of dating the player i date the
different sweet one. All these things set me apart from being a "normal" girl. But I'm a
very different unique person.I may seem happy and crazy but the pain i obscure is probably
all the same pains all the other girls say they have. I handle my pain differently though.
Instead of dreading on and on about it on facebook over and over again. I write private
poetry or just silently or just silently grieve. This pain I obscure.
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January 17, 2011 at 4:28 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ashley. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol
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January 16, 2011 at 6:52 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight..hope your time on Soup will be filled with sharing with luv..
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January 16, 2011 at 5:25 PM
I really enjoyed it, great to see one be themself, who says any category is normal in this world, Jesus was different from everyone in this world, therefore we should hope to be different in this world
Coles Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 1:36 PM
Ashley, i like your writing. Keep it up! You express yourself well! many people cant do what you have done. You have a talent and you should pursue it. Never give up doing what brings you joy and freedom. Great Work!
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