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This Old Home

Old home of brick and wood. Full of history. Weathered brown. Shingles crumbling and falling from the roof. Windows faded and black, reflecting nothingness. Vines stretching and crawling to the roof. Leaves of green and russet, Ladders lean extended in the air. Only their tops can be seen. There is a small porch. Nature has enclosed that in green vines tied like a bow. Darkness shrouds the backyard. There is a skinny tree with limbs bent to caress the ground. It seems to stand guard for intruders. There is an eerie silence around this place. A mystery lies in this old home.

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Date: 6/17/2024 8:53:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 3:00:00 PM
amber, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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