This Old Body

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Reese's Peeces is a popular chocolate candy (poetic license used on the spelling)

This old body's not state of the art Served me well but now's falling apart Like Reese's Peeces In bits and pieces Only thing working well's the kickstart AP: 1st place 2021 Posted on March 5, 2019

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James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 3/6/2019 12:43:00 PM

All is well when you age well!! Brilliant write pull yourself together and stop kicking yourself LOL! James

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/5/2019 7:40:00 PM

Is that under the covers? Aloha! Rico

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2019 7:55:00 PM

Yes, I keep things undercover.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 3/5/2019 6:30:00 PM

When I saw the title, I had to read it. My mother was always saying "This Old Body," now like mother, like daughter!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2019 6:57:00 PM

I hope you gave your mother lots of hugs, Sunlite.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 3/5/2019 6:17:00 PM

GREAT ONE! I TYPE IN CAPITALS SO YOU CAN READ IT!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2019 6:59:00 PM

Thank you so much, Timothy... but my eyes are just fine. LOL

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/5/2019 3:44:00 PM

Ha ha, good one line. My brother said when you get to forty bits start dropping off, I thought he was joking lol.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2019 4:34:00 PM

All of forty, eh!?

Jan Allison

Date: 3/5/2019 2:49:00 PM

very witty indeed Line I can relate at the moment lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2019 4:35:00 PM

LOL Thanks for your visit and compliment, Jan.