This Moment I Said

Last night, I wept
Because I heard 
The thunderstorms 
Rain in your heart
Every moment I bled
I stand here,
Broken before you
This moment, I said
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Huggins Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 8:34 PM
Love the compassion...Sabrina
Kendrick Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 3:03 AM
Beautifully written lines about compassion. Sara
Joseph Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 6:49 AM
ah your pain and yearning is so clear - this is great.
Brown Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 4:38 AM
Good morning Gregory. I enjoyed reading your splendid poem this morning. Thank you. Love, Carol
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