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This love I feel

As I look into your eyes all I can see is the love I feel. The love fills me with so much glee, this love I feel. I wish and wish you would notice me and this love I feel. Your brown eyes and hair only increase this love I feel. Please just see me and this love I feel before this love crushes me. Oh how I long to tell you all about this love I feel. I only hope one dat you will also experience this love I feel.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/8/2025 11:00:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.