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This Love

The fire of lust burns in my eyes. You are my love, my life. Yes, it's you I need. I confess, my sin is greed. Why? I do not know. Before you my life was nothing but shadows. But that was before, this is now. You bring light, somehow. Things are finally right in my heart. You gave me my new start. I need you so much! It's you I love! I cannot shake the way I feel. You have caused my heart to heal. I think that you, My Love, Must be a gift from above. An angel on loan, if you will. I wish this moment would stand still. Falling for you was my greatest mistake, And I promise you I shall never forsake. And like the unwritten promise between us, Nothing is more right than this love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/16/2010 5:43:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ashley. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/15/2010 7:06:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all... as this delight tonight...luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 3/15/2010 9:38:00 AM
I can feel your passion this write Ashley - It is a fabulous share for all your fellow poets -:)
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