This Love----Rhyme Version

oh! That this rose would be a symbol of love
the way it blooms- your beauty be told
your perfumed scent in the fragrance of
and lo the thorns pierce just as bold!



February 20, 2020

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Date: 2/24/2020 11:53:00 AM
Awesome Sandy - a wonderful poem by a talented poetess. Your pen does excel in anything you write, I agree 100% with Chris. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/24/2020 7:26:00 PM
wow… thank you for such kind words Jennifer... hugs
Date: 2/24/2020 8:19:00 AM
Wow, and now the rhyming version. Your pen excels in every area it explores my friend. This was beautiful Sandy
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Date: 2/24/2020 11:20:00 AM
thank you so much Chris... hugs
Date: 2/23/2020 5:42:00 PM
Hello Sandra … like a sting in the tail, so be a mite wary. I enjoyed your verse Sandra - Lindsay
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/23/2020 7:55:00 PM
Thank you so very much Lindsay! :)
Date: 2/23/2020 1:24:00 PM
wonderful poem
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/23/2020 7:54:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 2/22/2020 11:14:00 PM
Sandra, I came to stir my senses, and you turned the mixer up to puree. -Richard
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Date: 2/23/2020 7:54:00 PM
lol... thank you Richard...I think...
Date: 2/22/2020 4:43:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work. Very comparative in metaphor language. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/22/2020 8:31:00 PM
Thank you so much Sara... hugs
Date: 2/22/2020 11:49:00 AM
I like this...The pierce of thorns...is there to feel
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/22/2020 8:30:00 PM
Thank you so much Arturo :) hugs
Date: 2/22/2020 11:29:00 AM
Hi Sandra, You’ve a good descriptive write. Why not enter it in the contest? Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/22/2020 8:30:00 PM
Thank you so much Alexis... :) hugs
Date: 2/22/2020 11:03:00 AM
- BEAUTIFUL :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/22/2020 8:29:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise… hugs
Date: 2/22/2020 10:11:00 AM
Well composed Sandra, both as good as each other. Tom
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Date: 2/22/2020 8:29:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom... :) hugs
Date: 2/22/2020 8:53:00 AM
I like this just as much as the one you wrote for the contest--but, I like the other one a bit more. Well done my friend.
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Date: 2/22/2020 8:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay...I altered the other one some again, trying to get it where I want it... hugs
Date: 2/22/2020 8:32:00 AM
So beautiful. Your words are magical.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/22/2020 8:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Mark :) hugs
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