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This Last Autumn Leaf

This last autumn leaf
Without resistance it falls.
Then drifting gently,
It lands it's golden form
upon her soft, smiling face.

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

March 2, 2012 at 10:21 PM

Congrats on your win with this lovely tanka. Blessings, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

March 2, 2012 at 9:09 PM

DANIEL... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Kim Merryman

February 29, 2012 at 2:57 PM

Congrats on your 1st place win, Daniel! Good job. Love, Kim

Kash Poet

February 29, 2012 at 1:03 AM

Wonderful Tanka here.Congrats Daniel on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 28, 2012 at 10:52 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "Short Verse" contest Daniel. Love, Carol

Kim Merryman

February 27, 2012 at 10:09 AM

I can picture this very easily. Nice tanka, Daniel. Love, Kim

Doris Culverhouse

February 27, 2012 at 4:59 AM

funny picture yet Ibet you had other ideas.....well written tanka! Hope you are enjoying your time at the soup and will jump right in and share your flavors with us!!