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For inspiration I search license free photography and write according to what the image suggests to me. This is one of hundreds I have done. I intend on posting 100 examples of this type of writing.

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with your delicate little hand with your long slender fingers you touched my lips my heart was beating like a baby bird flying for the first time the two of us were sharing less than one person's space as our lips met the planet went silent the hurricane of day to day life calmed down to a soothing breeze the whole world froze accommodating this our private moment now I know they weren't banished Adam and Eve the garden with its explosive sense of peace blooms on the other side of this kiss Mar. 1 2016 armand

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Date: 10/7/2016 7:33:00 AM
Okay, I'm complaining now.... It's getting hot in here.... Again, romanticly insane.... you are a 10...Linda
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Date: 3/5/2016 8:34:00 PM
WOWOW. Super fave on this one. Love this kind of poetry from you. I wish it were not so late. I want to catch up with all your work but gotta get dinner made really soon now. Let me try to see a few more before i turn in!!
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Date: 3/1/2016 4:17:00 PM
so beautiful....I love how you describe romantic moments...a fave
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Date: 3/1/2016 1:57:00 PM
What a wonderful feeling of love your poem brings. This is what love feels like. Really nice, Maurice.
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Date: 3/1/2016 1:13:00 PM
That picture ndeed inspired. L' amour... I can feel an unexposed sensuality exposed behind the scene of less than one space for two..Just beautiful.
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