This Kind Old Woman

The vines stretched up the sides of her house
from behind the hedges, neatly trimmed
she'd been on that corner a long, long time
six decades before her eyesight dimmed

The concrete steps through puddingstone walls
that one would climb to reach her door
if they could speak, the tales they'd tell
such lovely things they kept in store

The many times that I would visit
she always had cookies on a plate
Exactly when I can't remember
but I was seven, or maybe eight

In winter time, her stairs and walk
I'd shovel out, sometimes with friends
I never thought at that tender age
that times like those would ever end

Four decades since those days have passed
and I finally found the words to say
this kind old woman mattered to me
this kind old woman who's gone away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Staton Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 9:11 AM
This poem was a joy to read. I thank God for our memories. Loved the imagery!
Wise Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 9:14 AM
Thanks for checking it out! LOVE your writing! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 12:09 AM
Reflection and nostalgia are both wonderful ways to remember a person who did their best to lift up the children in the neighborhood.
Wise Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 6:28 AM
That she did, and then some. Such a nice lady she was. :)
Sands Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 8:30 PM
This is so special. What precious memories shared in this poem! The details have me seeing it so clearly too :)
Wise Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 8:33 PM
I got very emotional when I wrote the last line. Thank u Heidi! :)
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