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This Is What Is Left Shining

Physical pain can run deep, restricting life as it once was Attacking the very things that make life what is should be To be lived fully enjoyed A trap it can be when there is little that is able to be done Compared to usual Those things that mean the most to someone, are limited Suddenly life is turned into survival with worries that easily consume Turning fears into what will be? However, in all this, it is amazing how someone else’s gentle words Can make a difference Understanding and care for what is, no matter what the struggle may be The simple plain understanding that life is not always smooth functioning Inside a person is still the same person with heart and soul full of love This is what matters most of all This is what should count in a world that holds unreasonable expectations In a place where sometimes the genuine giving love that counts is not priority Bottom line is, when all else is stripped away, this is what is left shining Heidi Sands 1/15/17

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Date: 1/19/2017 7:33:00 AM
Very insightful...shows yours strength!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/19/2017 7:44:00 AM
Thank you Mike! :)
Date: 1/18/2017 1:00:00 PM
Strong, beautiful words, Heidi. Your soul is untarnished ... it shines in your poetry. Love this poem. Love you always.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/18/2017 2:11:00 PM
Thank You Freddie. I appreciate that and I am happy you like this one! :)
Date: 1/16/2017 12:17:00 AM
Beautiful deep read Heidi! Peace, love, respect be with you.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/16/2017 7:42:00 AM
Thank you very much Abdullah :)
Date: 1/15/2017 4:56:00 PM
A kind word goes a long way... Beautiful
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2017 5:06:00 PM
Yes Tim, It certainly does. Thank you! :)
Date: 1/15/2017 3:27:00 PM
I absolutely love this one Heidi, those feelings I know all to well. As always another wonderful write; in it goes :)" :)" Thank you:)" Edward.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2017 3:28:00 PM
Thank you Edward: :) Double thank you actually :) :)
Date: 1/15/2017 2:52:00 PM
Indeed words can be so soothing .Awhile ago I twisted both ankles..Sprained ligaments...and had to do three weeks in bed..If it wasnt for the gentlenesd of family and friends..it would have felt a million thousand time worse.Hope you are not in physical pain sweet lady..If you are or are not tonight my prayers arecoming your way..and a Hug too.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2017 2:59:00 PM
You are right Charmaine. I hope your ankles are healing! And yes, I am in physical pain, Thank you for your prayers :) !

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