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Written 22 March 2025 

Submitted to Pets Poetry Contest of Rob Carmack

This is What I Call a Loyal Pet

“There is no loyalty greater than the love of a loyal dog.” By Author
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                                   This is What I call a Loyal Pet 

                                     If man can measure loyalty
                                 And gauge devoted love for man
                                 Then the yardstick was my Roxy,
                                   Even more loyal than a friend;

                            Mothered like babes since childhood days
                                Raised in splendour like a princess
                              She had learnt to grasp human ways,
                             Their joys, their sorrows and distress;

                             Each of her wag brightened the heart 
                             Like sparks of the sunshine of spring,
                                From her eyes, loyalty would dart
                               From her pat devotion would cling;

                                  She was ever first to welcome
                                The master with her wagging tail,
                              Her leaps and embrace so awesome
                                 And her waltz lovely without fail;

                                Whether in the shine of the day
                                Or in the grim darkness of night
                             Like soldier she would guard the way
                                    With loyalty ever so bright;

                                  A companion for garden walks
                               She would sniff all along the place
                                  Grasping whatever I would talk
                              As she strolled by my side with grace;

                               She would share the master`s sad ply 
                                    By lying straight in from of him
                                     And staring at him in the eyes
                               With her eyes with tears close to brim.

                              When fate`s hand was close by her side 
                                  After fourteen long lengthy years
                                  She opted for her kennel`s pride
                                Than inside the home to shed tears;

                                      Though meted out a surgery
                                    With thirty stiTches without cry
                                        She was beyond recovery
                                   And passed away without a sigh;

                                        Her funeral, a sheer glory,
                                And her grave on a high-pitched land
                                        Was a match to her loyalty
                                     Glimmering brighter than a man.

                                  Gone she`s with the family`s heart
                                    Like a jar shattered in fragments
                                       Like a piece of rag torn apart,
                                     Such to her was our attachment;

                                          Let fidelity be her name
                                        So dedicated was her love,
                                    Ever adored would be her fame
                                      With her loyalty miles above.
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Godwin Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 5:08 PM
Oh, my mind feels to numb to comment ... I felt this Beautifully penned, tear-rendering write. Not only was it emotional for me, but personal because of the love I still hold for a light faced shepherd I loved and was loved by 40 years ago. Caesar still holds my heart strings, brings me love thru memories and mind images of him. Thank you for bringing him to me right now via your poem ... CayCay
Guptar Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 11:41 PM
Our Roxy left us about one year back and so afflicted has been the family, particularly my spouse, that we do nat have the heart to raise another one so soon.
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March 23, 2025 at 11:40 PM
Thank you a lot dear poet for appreciating so highly the write. I share your deep feelings at the loss of your light faced shepherd years back. This breed of pets are so friendly, faithful, playful, understanding .... that they keep you amazing day after day and when they depart they rend your heart apart.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 11:44 AM
Hello Guptar, sorry for your loss of your pet dog. it is hard when we lose a pet after all they are family to. i know your heart aches. i know you miss her. I feel the same because of the loss my cat. Remember the good time. Blessings my friend. /Darlene//
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