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This is our fun

This is our fun (out in the sun) ~ Fields, harboring dreams, feeding the soul, singing along Now, more than it seems, outside the door, what could be wrong I promised to be there when nobody else was around Lost in the shadows where desperate wishes were found Eyes, look to the sky, shaded in blue, softer than air Clouds, whispering low, satin and silk, woven to share We danced in the clover when springtime had welcomed us in But felt only winter, the cold taking rest on our skin Still, we'll always be, left of the storm, out in the sun Smiles, endlessly free, for you and me, this is our fun ~ This poem is written to the melody of a popular Beatles song. Can you guess the song based on the melody of the poem?

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Date: 2/4/2025 12:14:00 AM
This is the only Beatles' song I can't play in my head any time I want! I won't be able to help you with the answer you seek, but you did answer my question: you are still here and you've still got magic ink. I've missed your presence and WILL visit again (it's late.) ... CayCay
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Chris Green
Date: 2/4/2025 3:04:00 PM
Thanks so much CayCay. The song is Norwegian Wood
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 2/4/2025 12:15:00 AM
I just noticed all your readers have pretty much left you hanging, no help at all! Made me laugh.
Date: 1/23/2025 6:24:00 PM
So glad you divulged the song title ~ I couldn't figure it out. Really enjoyed this, Chris, especially knowing how the melody goes. Good to see you here!
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Hello There
Date: 1/24/2025 12:07:00 PM
Yes, it didn't sound pretty, but of course I did. Lol.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2025 5:16:00 AM
Howdy, just passing through and testing the waters with this one. Glad you liked it and sang along (You know you did.) : )
Date: 1/23/2025 11:29:00 AM
The melody escaped me, but I'd dance in Strawberry Fields. Sounds better than the snow that arrived here on Tuesday! Fun write, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/23/2025 11:32:00 AM
Thanks for reading Lin. The song is Norwegian Wood
Date: 1/22/2025 3:54:00 PM
Ooh. That was fun. No clue on da tune
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Chris Green
Date: 1/23/2025 7:23:00 AM
Thanks Tom. Norwegian Wood.

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