Vijay Pandit Poet Free verse

This Is How My Story Ends

You're being fallacious, saying I still loved her
Accusing me of falsity to prey on emotions
When it was really you, whom I truly admired
But you ran for the exit, way before we tried.

When I first met her, in a chance encounter
Dazzle me she did, with brilliant scarlet colors
Sharing with me how deeply she yearned more.

Charmed by her visage, I let feelings ride
Being curious to agnize, why did she tantalize
Flirting with my eyes, resting on my vibes
Floating on my air, charming my universe,

Till I saw him with her, inciting me to bewilder
Who was that man, who held her in embrace
Taking boldly my place, while kissing her face.

As I felt all my oxygen eviscerate from lungs
Spinning like a vortex, my emotions whirled 
Taking a plunge into abyss of the unknown.

I didn't see it then, this is how my story ends
Perhaps it's best to skip reasoned arguments,
Especially those love doesn't comprehend
For in matters of heart, logic seldom helps.

June 17, 2017
Eight word challenge 7-- by John Hamilton
Agnize = to be fully aware or cognizant

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Valsa George April 7, 2022 at 5:19 AM "As I felt all my oxygen eviscerate from lungs Spinning like a vortex, my emotions whirled Taking a plunge into abyss of the unknown"...... how powerfully you have portrayed the emotions of bewilderment and frustration on seeing your love betrayed and your fiancee in the amorous embrace of another man....

Vladislav Raven October 29, 2018 at 9:48 AM Hi Vijay, The emotions flow in this write. Firstly, on the wave of love's dream, then wipeout as the waters drown your words in sadness. As Paul says, so life can be. Once again your emotions touch the heart with such a powerful touch. You are ever a true wordsmith my friend. Have a wonderful monday. Your friend always....Mike.

Paul Callus September 30, 2018 at 11:53 AM Charmed and bewitched...and suddenly the spell is broken! Life can be like that!! Regards // paul

Lyric Man June 20, 2018 at 1:04 PM Vijay, this couldn't have been easy. But you wrote with a skilled pen. Great respect! Vijay Pandit June 20, 2018 at 4:19 PM Many thanks ..appreciate the kind words, Lyric Man.

Silent One June 19, 2018 at 7:16 AM You used the words very well and created another great poem Vijay.. Vijay Pandit June 19, 2018 at 4:03 PM Thank you Silent One.

Heidi Sands June 19, 2018 at 6:16 AM Vijay, you have done so well with the words for this poem! It has a powerful impact reading it. Good luck in the contest :) Vijay Pandit June 19, 2018 at 6:46 AM Thank you Heidi..a pleasure to read your kind words.

Besma Riabi Dziri June 19, 2018 at 4:59 AM Weaving fantastically a beauty, a compelling story out of a common one is your challenge and win dear Vijay! An immense pleasure to read. A heart of a poet inking.. Shine and stay blessed. Vijay Pandit June 19, 2018 at 5:30 AM Many thanks Besma..your wonderful comments are much appreciated.

Nette Onclaud June 18, 2018 at 4:34 PM fascinating theme and wordplay, vijay...this is on my winner's list!..huggs Vijay Pandit June 18, 2018 at 4:36 PM So kind of you..thank you, nette.

Kyle Kriticos June 18, 2018 at 4:20 PM This was extremely deep and I won't plague you with relationship advice, rather I want to compliment you that this was extremely expressive and well penned! Thanks for sharing Vijay! Vijay Pandit June 18, 2018 at 4:35 PM Always enjoy reading your feedback Kyle..many thanks for your kind words.

Mike Gentile June 18, 2018 at 12:08 PM Excellent use of the words, Vijay and your specialty of romance is in full view here, Well done !! Vijay Pandit June 18, 2018 at 4:01 PM Thank you Mike--always appreciate your kind feedback.

Pandita Sietesantos June 18, 2018 at 10:50 AM Oh Vijay, I am wowed by this piece! I love how you skillfully and creatively weaved those challenging words into a challenging love affair! Bravo, my friend! Without a doubt, this piece will certainly be high on the winners list! Hugs and best regards. Pandita Vijay Pandit June 18, 2018 at 4:00 PM Thank you Pandita for your visit..always appreciate your kind feedback.

Winged Warrior June 18, 2018 at 9:47 AM You rose to the challenge my friend...great entry Vijay...L&L...^WW^ Vijay Pandit June 18, 2018 at 9:57 AM Always happy to read your feedback..thank you WW.

Kelli White June 18, 2018 at 9:08 AM Love has no logic. Hormones have no reason. The heart is but a muscle that can break with all unreason. Beautiful Vijay Pandit June 18, 2018 at 9:56 AM You are so right...appreciate your visit and comments Kelli.

Supraja Kannan June 18, 2018 at 7:21 AM Such a brilliant story. Reads like a winner.I enjoyed this story. Vijay Pandit June 18, 2018 at 8:40 AM Thank you Supraja.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 18, 2018 at 6:15 AM - Vijay, a lovely story ... just wish it was a happy end :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit June 18, 2018 at 7:03 AM So true..not a happy ending! Thank you Anne-Lise, for your kind feedback.

Demetrios Trifiatis June 18, 2018 at 2:55 AM Never would I wish to anyone in love tl live an experience like the one so vividly and artfully narrate my dear friend, Vijay! Captivating! Vijay Pandit June 18, 2018 at 7:00 AM I agree Demetrios..but, sometimes fiction mirrors image of real life. Many thanks, my friend for your comments.

Janice Canerdy June 17, 2018 at 10:35 PM You're so right: logic doesn't help in matters of love, deception, and heartbreak. Excellent write! Janice Vijay Pandit June 18, 2018 at 6:58 AM Thank you Janice..always appreciate the kind feedback.

Lyric Man June 17, 2018 at 8:53 PM Great write! Vijay Pandit June 18, 2018 at 6:58 AM Thank you Chance for your visit and feedback.