Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poet Rhyme

This Is Eden

Your nakedness in the morning light, 
Surrounds the JOY I received last night. 

Together we watched the glow of the Moon, 
Knowing this moment would end to soon. 

Sinful Shadows of my Lustful greed,
YOUR Forever Love: what I want and need. 

The sweet fragrance of Your Innocence, 
Waifs through the grieving of forgotten sense. 

Forever and Always, through all these years : 
Our tale of Love, and sex, and all its Fears.

WOW..For My EVE.. "  BARBARA JEAN "

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Heather Hill August 16, 2010 at 5:17 PM very sweet dedication for yours :) nice write, keep sharing and stay blessed!

Aaron Peters June 5, 2010 at 4:21 AM I like the poem. The expression of love. seem to have man to loose his place in the garden. The priceof love has been trouble and hardship.

James Fraser June 1, 2010 at 1:31 PM Terrific HG, a joy to read. Many congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's fine contest >> James

Barbara Gorelick May 31, 2010 at 8:15 PM Well, my Adam..our tale is out there for all to see..you sinful, lustful Adam you.. Im proud of you..lets see how your Eve does..BG

Dr.Ram Mehta May 31, 2010 at 5:23 PM Congrats on the win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 31, 2010 at 4:47 PM Congrats HG my silent beau on your success in my ADAM in Eden contest with this dynamic write.. with luv from your forever "Sweetheart"..hope u are feeling much better today... luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 28, 2010 at 8:16 PM Perfect! do not touch anything... its great.. my silent beau... SOUP MAIL... with luv from your forever "Sweetheart"

Debbie Guzzi May 27, 2010 at 6:17 PM ahhhhh if we only we NOt taught "lovemaking" was sin?....did you want to check line 7 innocence...to help you win! Light & Love

Lynette Chachere May 25, 2010 at 12:02 AM the fourth stanza is beautiful. and everything in this write of your is passionate a pure and sweet essence. outstanding and heartfelt love writes from you as always. i love you always spirit brother.& good luck as well.(: -Always&Forever your sister spirit Lynn

Poet Destroyer A May 24, 2010 at 4:19 AM enjoyed the read, nice entry with your poem, the best of luck,..p..d

Dr.Ram Mehta May 24, 2010 at 3:49 AM Wish you all the best in the contest. I like the first passionate couplet