This Is a Really Good Poem

This is a really good poem you will find
Having the perfect number of lines
That's not too deep where as you'll over think
Or one that's too vague that will put you to sleep

A really good poem I've written this time
Knows what it's doing when it comes to the rhyme
With just enough hidden to have you wanting more
Loaded with action so you'll never be bored

This really good poem is a lot like fine dining
A seven course meal laid out in its rhyming
Holding you captive from beginning to end
Making you wonder how without it you ever could live

With this really good poem you can see I'm not lying
As you read over it once getting ready for twice
Being impressed with its rhythm and flow
This is a really good poem just so you know
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 1:28 PM
I've rated t rate this poem a number 1 you did a good job writing this poetry. That is why I rated your poem number 1
Hauser  Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 11:51 PM
Thank you so much!
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 11:39 AM
Mike can i be the first to tell you... this is a really good poem lol - love your humour my friend:-) hugs jan xx
Hauser  Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 11:52 PM
Ahhh....thanks! Lol!
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