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This Heart of Mine

No love to share this heart of mine; just one glass in which to pour the wine. Cold empty space now fills the bed where once you laid your weary head and silence reigns in deafening tone, the sound of laughter turned to stone. One toothbrush now stands all alone by a missing bottle of your cologne and the fridge is full of meals for one; no point in cooking now you’re gone. No heart with which my heart to twine Oh well, at least the wine’s all mine ! **an older write of mine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/10/2010 3:06:00 AM
That last line of your sure made me smile-- I think I remember this one, but that last line still got me! ^_^ Enjoyed that silver lining in your cloud ;) -- nikko :)
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Date: 6/24/2010 2:10:00 PM
Good! Oh, and come see my blog if you want to pick a flower! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/24/2010 1:53:00 PM
ok, here I am soupmailing you at 2:53 p.m mountain time. TESTING 1 2 3......
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Date: 6/23/2010 3:17:00 PM
Wonderful read Sharon, I could picture the scene as I read >> James
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Date: 6/23/2010 11:29:00 AM
Great last line that brings levity to this wonderful poem. I really enjoyed. Take care. -Mike
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Date: 6/23/2010 10:39:00 AM
Heartfelt indeed,very sad,touching verses yet with a hopeful twist in the end!going tmfvs!
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Date: 6/23/2010 7:08:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem this afternoon, Sharon and bst of all is your last line!!! Did you find a photo of a hoopoe on the net? If not go to my facebook album and just have a look there!...:) Gert
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Date: 6/22/2010 8:41:00 PM
Finding the good in the bad. I LIKE IT. lUv, Andra
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Date: 6/22/2010 9:23:00 AM
A tinge of sadness with a cheeky smile at the end. Nice one. Thanks for your kind comments on my poems.
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Date: 6/22/2010 5:15:00 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading your poetry this morning Sharon. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with an overload of inspiration. Hoping you will challenge yourself to use all the inspiration which you may receive today. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2010 2:12:00 PM
I think this reminds me of my past along time ago the empty spot in ones life ..really enjoyed sarah x
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Date: 6/21/2010 12:07:00 PM
i enjoyed your poem. i loved the flow of it. have you ever considered trying to write sonnets. looking at the way you rhyme, i think that you would be good at it. or at least you might enjoy the challenge of trying to perfect the form. keep sharing your work with us. thanks.
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Date: 6/21/2010 11:26:00 AM
lol...Drink up.....Great write.....Larry
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Date: 6/21/2010 10:59:00 AM
I love the twist of humor in your last line! All the best to you, Karen
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