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This Greyling Sallow Place

Gloomy dismal, and forlorn... 
that's how this day was borne
in a Greyling sallow place 
where death doth reign
without a face.

In a boneyard of decaying flesh,
one fresh abyss was dug
to the depth of six feet
before the night was still.
With shovel in his hand,
the digger gave a shrug
and left the land of the dead.

The cathedral stood tall
but grimly foreboding
on the edge of a haunted wood.
Built on hallowed ground,
where the ancient ones 
lie decaying in their graves.

Knaves and preachers, 
the righteous and the sinners,
followers and teachers...
all buried side by side 
covered now with hoar frost.

Lives, once lost 
never see the light of another morn.
They are mourned and tossed 
into a hole like rubbish and trash,
or as ashes interred in an urn
after a burn. It's all the same
to the reaper.

Harsh winds have taken aim
at maudlin tree limbs
that seem to hang their heads
after watching their leaves
flayed by Autumn's sinister breeze.
Seasonal zephyrs have no pity.
They always have their way
with the rape of deciduous trees.

Winter's chill thrives in a world so still.
It's created a haunting silence,
one nearly serene in this scene.
There's no place to rest
in between life and death
in such a stygian world. 

No escape from somber despair.
There's only an ominous pall 
if anything is to be found there at all...
it will surely be expounded
in the quiet space of such a dreary place.
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Kitchin Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 5:07 AM
Lin, hauntingly captivating, lives lost and forgotten and left in places that are both serene and somber, wonderfully penned!
Lane Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 5:36 AM
Tania, thanks so much seeing what I saw in this photo offered for an AP contest.
Rodgers Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 11:57 AM
Dearest Lin, wow, such depths of despair with haunting eloquence. Each line just aches with the weight of sorrow of a desolate world where darkness reigns supreme. Your words really pierce the soul, confronting the harsh realities of life and death with raw honesty. May your poetic journey continue to shed light in the shadows, Daniel.
Lane Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 12:59 PM
I was a titch worried where my mind was wandering in this one... written with that picture in mind for a contest in All Poetry. It's ongoing about a space between black and white... my Greyling place. Thanks ever so much for finding something to like about this one, Daniel.
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