This Gorgeous Butterfly

There once was a fellow named Bert Who had always been considered a jerk Till one day he passed by With this gorgeous butterfly Couldn't miss Bert's dirty big smirk © Jack Ellison 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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J.T. Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 10:34 PM
Nice work on bert the jerk. Perhaps he's one of those that hasn't told anyone he's a poet. -J.T.
Ellison Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 6:39 AM
Thank you J.T.! I appreciate your humorous comments! Jack
Makama Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 11:15 AM
Sound poetry like a mid night song scrubbing the mind to peace and comfort. I love everything about this page and a 7 definitely.
Ellison Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 11:16 AM
You are much too kind, my friend! Thank you... Jack!
Breidenthal Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 11:01 PM
Bert the jerk! Nice little one. : D Always, Laura
Ellison Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 6:20 AM
Love and hugs, Jake The Snake!!! xxx
Eastman Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 12:49 PM
???... Can't win them all...
Ellison Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 1:58 PM
Ha! Bert sure showed them! LOL xxx
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