This Girl****the Limerick Game****

Limerick
9,9,6,6,9
a,a,b,b,a
--------------In response to Deborah Guzzis' Limerick game....----------------------------------


There once was a girl in the city
Who thought the big city was dingy
She moved away with me
Chilling, in Tennesse.
She's a little to clingy for me!!!

*****The Limerick Game:
Raul Moreno has been tagged........
                                                                                
                                                                                              Jared Pickett......
                                                                                                   8/1/09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 4:53 PM
gotta watch those clingy ones! Light & Love
Freeman Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 10:13 AM
A classy limeric Jared, jolly good show, Moses
Richards Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 3:40 PM
Good job! Looking forward to seeing Raul's follow-up poem ! :) !! ~ Carrie
Chircop Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 7:57 AM
great limerick--charma
Fraser Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 4:29 AM
Lovely Limerick Jared>>James
Moreno Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 12:41 AM
Thanks for the tag Jared, I will work on my Limerick over the next few days...Raul
Goff Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 9:18 PM
great limerick! Jared! your very talented! mail... jimbo
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