This Girl Has Me In Her Grasp

Mmm this girl i know
Shes bossy so
For i do not like you
I may be lieing its not true
It may be love
At this moment I cant move 
Your engaging stare has me paralyzed 
Im in you grasp 
How do you know of my love
Its time for a retreat
For that im beat
I need to rewind
My heart is stuck in a bind
Ive never had the feeling
Im going to jump through the ceiling
Can i be this overjoyed
Of this girl ive always tried to avoyed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Magee-Dittberner Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 5:44 PM
I do not like it very much, but I do like what you're TRYING to say. Glad you feel that way =)
Ross Jr. Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 5:27 PM
Fun, humor, nice tempo, emotional examination. I like it very much!
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