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This girl has me in her grasp

Mmm this girl i know Shes bossy so For i do not like you I may be lieing its not true It may be love At this moment I cant move Your engaging stare has me paralyzed Im in you grasp How do you know of my love Its time for a retreat For that im beat I need to rewind My heart is stuck in a bind Ive never had the feeling Im going to jump through the ceiling Can i be this overjoyed Of this girl ive always tried to avoyed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 7/14/2011 5:44:00 PM
I do not like it very much, but I do like what you're TRYING to say. Glad you feel that way =)
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Date: 7/14/2011 5:27:00 PM
Fun, humor, nice tempo, emotional examination. I like it very much!
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