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This Exquisite Emotion

Like sailing on a moonbeam, this feeling so exquisite Never felt such overwhelming devotion A feeling so intense like the very first time As I succumb to this heart felt emotion Written about in books, sung about in songs Since the very first romantic encounter Adam and Eve, Romeo and Juliette The story of love never alters What's happening to me, love's taken over The sillies are more difficult to write Gonna take a shower till my senses cool This love stuff is giving me a fright What if my sillies have been lost forever Might very well resign from the Soup Known as the jester, funny man of renown Gonna try hard the sillies to recoup Like sailing on a moonbeam, this feeling so exquisite Never felt such overwhelming devotion © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 4/20/2014 9:22:00 AM
Sounds like Dragon as he looks in mirrors at himself. Complete overwhelming devotion! Imagine when he's grown up! You're OUR moonbeam that we're devoted to. Jester or serious we'll still be there for you. Just ask Dragon. He says he''ll snort fire and rain on anyone's parade who thinks differently. Silly Dragon! He should learn: not everyone needs to think as he does, But that's Dragon. 'Why not? Because diversity adds layers of beauty' He's scratching his head on that one. Sigh! Don't hurt yourself, Dragon!..
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Date: 4/21/2014 6:48:00 AM
"Jester or serious we'll still be there for you"... now that, my dear Carol, is so very sweet of you! You are the most loyal of all my friends here on the Soup! You are a treasure! Loving hugs, Jack XOXOX
Date: 4/19/2014 6:07:00 PM
You're doing great Jack! Wish I could sail on a moonbeam too. {by the way....Charms sends you her warmest regards :):)] // paul
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Date: 4/19/2014 6:19:00 PM
What a sweet lady... miss her dear heart! Send her my love and my undying belief that she will return! (I so hope) Thanks, my loyal friend, Paul
Date: 4/19/2014 1:12:00 PM
Sillies or love your writes are delightful
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Date: 4/19/2014 6:16:00 PM
Hey very nice compliment Tim... thanks a bunch!
Date: 4/19/2014 11:52:00 AM
I am sure the sillies will re emerge in full force my friend.
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Date: 4/19/2014 6:15:00 PM
Oh I have no doubt about that and neither does my wife Cathie!!! LOL Cheers, Rick!
Date: 4/19/2014 11:40:00 AM
Kenny....you will always be needed here...sillies or serious...
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Date: 4/19/2014 6:14:00 PM
YOU ARE THE SWEETEST my dearest Queen Eileen! Going through a bit of a tough time right now but will get through! Thanks for your loving words as always! Great big hugs, Kenny XOXOX
Date: 4/19/2014 7:48:00 AM
Shall we start calling you "softie", Jack? You are traveling in no man's land territory, don't you know? Ha, you'll be flying high as a kite :)
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Date: 4/19/2014 6:11:00 PM
I've always been a "softie" my dearest Toquyen! LOL Love ya dear friend! Hugs, Jack XOXOX

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