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This Ditty

In limerick form is this ditty,

A rhyme not sublime, but it’s witty.

I’m a Word Warrior who

Kicks a rhyme like Kung-fu.

Don’t HAI-ku me. It won’t be pretty!


(For Rhyme Battle Round 5)
and now for the N/A Contest

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Phyllis Babcock

August 13, 2014 at 11:56 AM

Okay word warrior i won't fight with you and your kung fu. ha ha . love phyl

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 27, 2014 at 10:24 PM

Amazing write Andrea ! thoughtful n intelligent, congrats on win !

Joseph May

April 27, 2014 at 7:10 AM

Congrats on your win Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

April 27, 2014 at 4:30 AM

Andrea... Congratulations. Thank you for the support. XOX~ Linda

Jack Horne

April 21, 2014 at 3:00 PM

lol, had a chuckle here

Joe Maverick

April 20, 2014 at 9:19 AM

Liking this one lots Andrea, I won't be going to the States anytime soon then Tanka-you.. L O L))) you seem to be in feisty sort of mood, Hope Easter is going good for you..'

Suzanne Delaney

April 16, 2014 at 9:40 PM

No one does it better...LOL Good luck ....you do Haiku pretty. SuZ

Carrie Richards

April 16, 2014 at 9:18 PM

LOVE IT !! You wrote one that is perfect for poets !! I can see this winning-bigtime!!

Eileen Manassian

April 14, 2014 at 8:18 PM

Oh Andrea....You are something else. I won't even dare to HAI-ku you. I want to live. Hugs

Lucilla Carrillo

April 14, 2014 at 5:33 PM

I like it, me - I am not good with rhymes. I am still hanging on. Many blessings... Lucilla

Harry Horsman

April 14, 2014 at 5:06 PM

no contest Andrea, amazing poetry, and extremely clever

Tim Ryerson

April 14, 2014 at 2:55 PM

I most certainly shall NOT HAI-ku you and I SURELY have no inclination to get Kung-fued by you either, Madame Word Warrior-Sonnet Queen-Limerick Master-Fine Footler Friend...I THINK I entered this but my rhyme sucked...I'll probably finish 36th if I'm lucky...Funny stuff my friend! - Tim

Tim Ryerson

April 14, 2014 at 2:59 PM

Soup Mail coming...Read it immediately and don't footle around and wait til tomorrow or something okay?

Vincent Flannery

April 14, 2014 at 2:23 PM

Very witty and funny limerick Andrea. Enjoyed it very much. Take care.

Nette Onclaud

April 14, 2014 at 12:55 PM

smashing piece, andie.. limerick is one of your great suits!... SOUPIE!

Richard Lamoureux

April 14, 2014 at 9:34 AM

I will not put myself at risk *lol* this is fun.

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 14, 2014 at 7:44 AM

This limerick of yours brought a smile On my gloomy face so long as a mile Hope you continue that way Please, I do you really pray For to keep with your poems in the file. Hilarious my dear Andrea! Enjoyed it tremendously!

Monterey Sirak

April 14, 2014 at 7:23 AM

You are amazing and so funny! Time warp here, I just heard the song Kung Fu Fighting playing in my head, only instead of "their feet", they were singing "their pens were fast as lightning"