This Day - My Autumn Dream

A day to relish is this day of mine. October’s sunlight warmly rests on me, and sky, immersed in blue, is heavenly while nature flaunts its lovely fall design! The trees along my street stand splendidly, bright ruby red and gold hues on display. My autumn’s dream is that the world would stay exactly like this day, perpetually! Written Oct. 21, 2011, one beauty of a day

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Date: 11/8/2011 5:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "8 Line Verse" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2011 2:36:00 AM
Lovely images and easy going feeling to this one Andrea. I see you relaxing , perhaps sitting in a window with the sun warm on the glass, watching all the beauty around you. great words, well done...Margaret thank you for your kind words...
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Date: 11/7/2011 7:58:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on HM for this stunningly beautiful poetry entry my friend..lovely lines luv..
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Date: 11/7/2011 2:21:00 PM
Very nice lines Andrea. Congratulations on your win in Autumn's Dream contest
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Date: 11/7/2011 2:17:00 PM
congrats on another win with this lovely evocation of autumn!
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Date: 10/25/2011 8:41:00 PM
lovely words for a lovely season Andrea.. charming lines of visual delights ... good luck in the contest for Rick.. luv..
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Date: 10/24/2011 10:44:00 AM
You make me jealous I don't live in your head. Your painted pictures are where I want to bed. The freshness of air just fills up my senses. Falls freedom releases all my defenses.
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Date: 10/24/2011 7:03:00 AM
very pretty imagery. I agree that it's a shame that fall is so short when it has such beautiful colors! maybe it is to make us appreciate it while it's there. I love how you said "nature flaunts its lovely fall design" and "autumns' dream..." great lines and ending. i hope rick sees what a beautiful piece this is :)
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Date: 10/24/2011 6:35:00 AM
Autumn certainly is a colourful season, and you capture the essence of it here in this poem. I have read so many really good autumn/fall poems recently, but this must stand a good chance in the contest...good luck. xoxo Robert.
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Date: 10/24/2011 3:55:00 AM
Hello, Andrea... nice poem and good entry for the contest.. how are you, besides sharing your awesomeness ,,.. stopping by real quick,,, p.d.
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Date: 10/23/2011 5:42:00 AM
Beautiful visuals - a sure winner. Hope you get to use your number plate again soon : )
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Date: 10/23/2011 5:03:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Good luck in the contest..The cool and crispness of the air is wonderful respite from the heat of summer and the cold of winter..God is so good..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 10/22/2011 10:20:00 PM
It is the best of the seasons but for what follows. Well writ.
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Date: 10/22/2011 8:43:00 PM
Nice imagery in this sweet poem.Best wishes.Will send a soupmail soon.
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Date: 10/22/2011 8:16:00 PM
Hi sweetie, October splendidly adorned in your lovely verse. I would make the same request - perpetually- It is always too short.
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