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This City Speaks

Faces void all passing by open eyed yet emptied like flashes of a vacancy sign blank stares like orphans pitied Caught in time no plans to sketch just colored pencils with broken tips Only the artist's see painting joy on canvas as if an apology for selling a feeling - to what the living should be free This city speaks of sunsets passed and lakes that serve as portraits hung rush for a weekdays check to cash while natures gift remains outrun For me I'd rather fish the sea a humbled walk along the beach fall upon a stack of leaves but freeways and buildings my peace has breached In love with a life of simple pleasures unhurried by the next place to go where hospitality is still the measure not a life that's put on like a show Where did all the soft eyes go the patriots passion the pride when did this world spin out of control and kindness become something to hide? To each his own the saying goes but what of love thy neighbor? When abnegation is no longer chose it's no wonder isolation be favored

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/5/2014 10:16:00 AM
this piece sure speaks all by itself very beautifully painted piece excellent pen
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Date: 9/25/2014 12:47:00 PM
Right there with you, sweetheart. I was talking to someone the other day about how many simple things have become unfashionable. You are so eloquent.
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Date: 9/25/2014 9:09:00 AM
A very deep and questioning write my friend.. I prefer solitude to that of mixing with strangers but see and acknowledge the tribulations of my fellow man. I do my part but do not announce it publicly. You have a poet's caring heart my friend. Just be careful it does not get crushed by the weight of the world! Another 7 rating for this fine write..
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Sarai Virden
Date: 9/25/2014 12:24:00 PM
honored. Never doubted your integrity for a second. From thought to pen, poets make the sweetest friends. hope your day is wonderful Robert!
Date: 9/25/2014 8:15:00 AM
Although I love nature and solitude I am also attracted to the rhythms of the city. I enjoyed this piece Sarai.
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Sarai Virden
Date: 9/25/2014 12:19:00 PM
I can see that in you. And yet with a heart as deep as yours, i would dare say you could transform pure noise into a poetic cadence.

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