This Christmas

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This year for Christmas... You are in heaven Surrounded by missed loved ones. Christmas in heaven How glorious it must be Spending Christmas day Celebrating with our king! Angelic voices Singing sweet praises Unlike anything We have heard on this earth A sense of peace no sadness, no, tears, no pain Just joy and laughter How wonderful it must be! Though we miss you now We will meet again real soon Written for the poetry contest Christmas in Heaven: A focus on loved ones in Heaven at Christmastime Sponsored by BJ Legros Kelley Placement: 2nd

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/31/2022 11:03:00 PM

"A sense of peace no sadness, no, tears, no pain" - Great depiction of the heavenly life. Congratulations!

Anna Marie Kaianah
Date: 1/25/2023 1:54:00 PM

Thank you so much, Christuraj.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 12/31/2022 1:45:00 PM

Anna, your poem is filled with peace. Merry Christmas, and congratulations on your high placement in this poetry contest <3 Beautiful images, beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing in the contest, Merry Christmas and prayers for a very blessed New Year for you and yours <3

Anna Marie Kaianah
Date: 12/31/2022 10:18:00 PM

Merry Christmas my sweet friend and Happy new year! Thank you for the placement <3

Mark Koplin

Date: 12/31/2022 6:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Anna!

Anna Marie Kaianah
Date: 12/31/2022 10:16:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Joseph May

Date: 12/27/2022 8:30:00 AM

A heavenly Christmas filled with peace, Very nicely penned Anna

Anna Marie Kaianah
Date: 12/31/2022 10:16:00 PM

Thank you.