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This Beautiful Fleeting Moment

Dear moment, this moment, this small little moment, Do you know how important you are? Do you know how you’re a part of me, moment, How you’re the biggest moment by far? You’re my big little moment, in this moment of time, You’re the best little moment to find, And I wish we could chat but I see that you’ve gone, Disappeared to the back of my mind. 25th April 2017, never submitted in any contest, except this for Silent One :) Awarded a 1st

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Susan Ashley

Date: 2/9/2018 4:27:00 PM

A deep and enchanting write Lewis. Congratulations on your win with this excellent poem. ~Susan

Eve Roper

Date: 2/8/2018 11:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Lewis! Great choice for the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/5/2018 9:27:00 PM

Lovely little charming poem. Love how you delivered the package. Well done, congrats on this winner of a poem, Lewis.

Lewis Raynes
Date: 2/5/2018 9:41:00 PM

Thanks Line. :)

Silent One

Date: 2/5/2018 4:26:00 PM

Great choice for your best poem Lewis.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, I am happy you entered and the poem will be showcased..

Lewis Raynes
Date: 2/5/2018 4:36:00 PM

cool, thank you Silent One, I'm glad u enjoyed this short poem so much, thank u for the placement, and for the showcasement :)

J Hamilton Gist

Date: 1/9/2018 4:41:00 PM

And it can pass in the blink of...

Lewis Raynes
Date: 1/9/2018 5:45:00 PM

just like that yep, thanks :)

Ronnie Enoch

Date: 12/27/2017 4:32:00 PM

There are moments where we would like for time to stop as we enjoyed the smallest piece of that time and then reality sets in then there is another life

Elena Welsh

Date: 12/25/2017 11:12:00 PM

Short and sweet, I loved everything about this poem :)

Rainbow Promise

Date: 12/25/2017 7:08:00 AM

Ps: I won’t allow a “Magical Fleeting Moment” to disappear “at the back of my mind”; it’s too magical! ??Hugs And all the best in writing more good poetry.

Rainbow Promise

Date: 12/25/2017 6:48:00 AM

Great! Sometimes moments like weddings, graduations, awesome vacations are fleeting moments we wish would last forever. Your poems cause us to want to search for more in us! Thanks for sharing. A fav.