Lewis Raynes Poet Quatrain

This Beautiful Fleeting Moment

Dear moment, this moment, this small little moment,
Do you know how important you are?
Do you know how you’re a part of me, moment,
How you’re the biggest moment by far?

You’re my big little moment, in this moment of time,
You’re the best little moment to find,
And I wish we could chat but I see that you’ve gone,
Disappeared to the back of my mind.



25th April 2017, never submitted in any contest, except this for Silent One :)
Awarded a 1st

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Susan Ashley February 9, 2018 at 4:27 PM A deep and enchanting write Lewis. Congratulations on your win with this excellent poem. ~Susan

Eve Roper February 8, 2018 at 11:15 PM Congratulations on your win, Lewis! Great choice for the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier February 5, 2018 at 9:27 PM Lovely little charming poem. Love how you delivered the package. Well done, congrats on this winner of a poem, Lewis. Lewis Raynes February 5, 2018 at 9:41 PM Thanks Line. :)

Silent One February 5, 2018 at 4:26 PM Great choice for your best poem Lewis.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, I am happy you entered and the poem will be showcased.. Lewis Raynes February 5, 2018 at 4:36 PM cool, thank you Silent One, I'm glad u enjoyed this short poem so much, thank u for the placement, and for the showcasement :)

J Hamilton Gist January 9, 2018 at 4:41 PM And it can pass in the blink of... Lewis Raynes January 9, 2018 at 5:45 PM just like that yep, thanks :)

Ronnie Enoch December 27, 2017 at 4:32 PM There are moments where we would like for time to stop as we enjoyed the smallest piece of that time and then reality sets in then there is another life

Elena Welsh December 25, 2017 at 11:12 PM Short and sweet, I loved everything about this poem :)

Rainbow Promise December 25, 2017 at 7:08 AM Ps: I won’t allow a “Magical Fleeting Moment” to disappear “at the back of my mind”; it’s too magical! ??Hugs And all the best in writing more good poetry.

Rainbow Promise December 25, 2017 at 6:48 AM Great! Sometimes moments like weddings, graduations, awesome vacations are fleeting moments we wish would last forever. Your poems cause us to want to search for more in us! Thanks for sharing. A fav.

Chris Hagy December 24, 2017 at 10:58 PM Such a beautiful little "fleeting" write... one of your better moments :) Have a great day :)

Dale Gregory Cozart May 6, 2017 at 9:00 AM this is charming. Lewis Raynes May 6, 2017 at 9:41 AM Thank you Dale

Darlene De Beaulieu May 2, 2017 at 1:44 PM I am going to put this poem in my fav. As I was reading your poem I thought yes I will save it. Lewis Raynes May 2, 2017 at 4:24 PM Thanks Darlene, I'm really glad you enjoyed this poem

Edward Mccall April 27, 2017 at 8:04 AM What a great little poem, in it goes to my favs. Lewis Raynes April 27, 2017 at 4:37 PM Thanks Edward, every moment is precious

Sunlite Wanter April 25, 2017 at 6:42 PM I really love this little poem. It's deeper than you probably thought. A 7 and a fav for me. Lewis Raynes April 25, 2017 at 7:04 PM Thank you SW.