This Beautiful Autumn Night

On this beach I walk with kindred,
In search of feelings I've always hunted,
Away from things that keep me haunted
Ah! to this lake that god has founded.

I tread golden sands till I see her face,
A face not seen before in this place,
One I've seen but in a dream of quick pace,
How within such a dream I'm held in her embrace.

I wonder toward this sweet temptation,
Tempted by her eyes scintillation,
Guided by some heavenly vocation,
Finally greeting with blushing elation.

Now we frolic in this lake that is sparkling,
Till the Ontario sun is no longer shinning,
Till the birds that soar above are no longer flying,
Till these crystalline stars are no longer hiding.

It's been two weeks since I've seen her face,
A face that my memory cannot erase.
Now walking these lanes in search of maize,
I see a face I haven't seen in many days.

Now we ride on this wooden boat for two,
Speaking of nothing but me and you,
Thinking and speaking of nothing but just us two,
Then

Years go by and we're still holding tight,
laying in a field under pale moonlight,
alone i gaze at eyes do bright.
And I say to you.

Even when I pass—
Promise that you'll keep my heart,
The one I give to you
on this beautiful autumn night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/21/2012 6:47:00 AM
Yes, Daniel it was a beautiful autumn night...but I waithing for the spring now.Thank you for sharing this poem. - Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/21/2012 6:46:00 AM
excellent pen daniel!
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Date: 1/14/2012 8:22:00 PM
amazing.....it nearly brought tears to my eyes! keep up the good work Daniel ;)
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Date: 1/3/2012 9:36:00 AM
This poem was so beautiful to me I wish that some guy would say or even think about me like this. I really enjoyed it thanks a lot and please keep writing.
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