Thirty Candles

Youth is raw and naked
Bare white teeth gnarling
Into the flesh through the bones of life

Laughing the mocking laughter of the undefeated
Knowing all

Proud is a peacock in full color
Hard, strong, tall and beautiful
Youth is stubborn
Youth is glory
Youth is fleeting

Thirty candles on a birthday cake
Welcome to life and living
Welcome first grey hair
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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November 25, 2008 at 8:35 PM
Your on a roll Fritz, this is terrific..into the flesh through the gones of life..love that line. BG
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