Thirty

As thin as water
Swimming in the rampant blood clots of ice
Lumps and warts, primordial abomination in an absinthe glass
Down in one and down with thirty. Those filthy hands
The snail paths which ooze from each digit. To touch.
To touch. Saccharine words wrapped up in sugar trails
Never close enough to the real thing to be mistaken
We are not quite short-sighted enough to blend the blurs of
Little hands; dirty bloody hands. Wash the clinging stench off
But filth will linger for an eternity under fingernails, under piers and prominade pretences
The world in a box for that one woman. A soul; a crucifix of thirty, a fine daisy 
Chain of woven skins and notches, bite marks. Those apple love hearts
Miniscule in comparison. O, Greek god! The chorus calls
The angry Nazi blue, Prussia in droplets; those ink-wells of sulphur
Brilliant blonde, magnificence in porcelein. Brainwaves thin as water
Those little demons; Succubus, Siren! Lillith? Dragging at your closet walls
You whore.

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This poem earned an Honourable Mention in the member contest "Something Wicked This Way
Comes" housed here at the soup and hosted by Deborah Guzzi. :)
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Gorelick Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 3:46 PM
Some great phrases in this write. conrats on your success in the contest. BG
Esquire Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 1:28 PM
Dear Nathaniel,Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Honorable Mention in Deborah's "Wickedness" Contest ALWAYS...HG
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May 14, 2009 at 10:46 AM
Congratulatins on placing in Deborah's poem. W-I-C-K-E-D Love, Dane
Townsend Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 6:40 AM
Congratulations on the HM it is very well deserved. Amazing imagery in this one very passionate throughout. Smiles from Lolita
Moreno Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 6:58 PM
Congrats with you HM Nathaniel...Raul
Winter Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 4:29 PM
Congrats on your win in Debbie's contest! Love, Shar
Guzzi Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 2:02 PM
OH MY ...goodness...what does the thirty denote....in your mind is there only virgin mother whore....perhaps your wrath should be saved for the societies which allow only these roles?....as a verse it has most excellent qualities as feelings to live with the boil has been set to lance. Light & Love
Devonshire Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 8:32 AM
Brilliant poetry, Nathaniel! Like the way you describe words that cannot be mistaken for real because they are "wrapped up in sugar trails." I feel as if I have been taken on the embryonic journey of an evil woman. Very compelling! Love, Carolyn
Shango Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 8:22 AM
What rich torrent of imagery, a pure gushing of passion, a fantastic retelling of mortal corrupt history ... what an awesome write.
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