Thirteen Little Lines

Do you feel...my boyish daydreams? 
The cries of a collapsing brain; 
the melting, smoking images that linger as they cinder, flare and sing
back to the night. 

All those noisy things, as they stand, 
quiet themselves in a moment..and the red curtain parts...

I say, take that brush and paint me in all that is you; 
bathe and yoke me in all that you are. 

Because love is a blanket mess, sticky and sapped in uproar and whispers; 
because lovers inherit each other’s hell, I’ll flounder in yours; 

I writhe for you, and that ardent core inside,
but you know this, as a reflection knows itself. 

When all that is celestial feels its decline, and the spheres cry into that cold space, 
we can stand, laughing hand in hand, at the precipice of all things, 
throwing peddles and blowing kisses.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bedave Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 6:54 PM
ummm interesting... i loved this one alot you got a way with words
Lucas Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 5:01 AM
Thank you. I'm happy you connected with this piece. It took a lot out of me.
A   Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 4:36 PM
Hi Jeffrey, Congratulations, I'm scoping and enjoying the new featured poems for this week. :) It was nice to see your poem on the poetry soups, home page. Have a fun week. Always & Forever *LINDA
Lucas Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 5:51 PM
Thank you, Linda. :)
Mehta Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 5:09 AM
A well pen poem, enjoyed it. Congrats on the poem being featured this week, jeffrey
Lucas Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 1:53 PM
Thank you so much, Dr. Mehta. I appreciate the support.
Ioane Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 3:51 AM
The depth of this piece makes me breathless, the mystery of the expressions is beyond my comprehension- overall a Great write dear Jeffrey, so gifted! Tiaua
Ioane Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 9:09 PM
My grandmother used to say; 'live today as if theres no tomorrow, that way you will have no regrets'. Your friend would have loved this piece!!, her loss.
Lucas Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 4:31 AM
Thank you. . . never got a chance to give it to the person I wrote it for, actually.
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