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Thirteen Fine Thoroughbreds - Tongue-Twister

Through the forest tear thirteen fine thoroughbreds
Fraught with tension they flick their fair heads
Thrashing through the thickest thickets fittest first
Thundering from forest for the fields they thirst
Freed from their flight they finish together
Thirteen fine thoroughbreds frolic forever





Contest : Twist my Tongue
Sponsored by:  Nina Parmenter
8th Place

Copyright © Nick Bagnall | Year Posted 2020

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/24/2020 9:14:00 AM I like your twist, congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/23/2020 8:07:00 PM Congrats! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/23/2020 7:33:00 PM Nick what I really like about yours is that it told a really cool story and was grammatical as well as using alliteration as a good tongue twister does. Congrats in the contest. this was one of my favorites. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2020 2:10:00 PM a fab tongue twister and such fun alliteration:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Gary Smith Date: 1/21/2020 5:54:00 PM Great fun trying to say this Nick, congrats. :) Login to Reply

Wendy Watson Date: 1/19/2020 10:45:00 AM Hello, Nick I've read through quite a few poets' examples with no hesitation but you definitely tripped me up 'through the thickest thickets!' Well done! Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/16/2020 12:20:00 PM Hello Nick Bagnall, so nice to meet you. Yes this is a tongue twister. Fun to read. Have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply

Jenish Somadas Date: 1/16/2020 10:56:00 AM In the third line my tongue twist..then I troubled at every word to read..lol..Great entry in the contest.. Login to Reply Nick Bagnall Date: 1/16/2020 11:11:00 AM Thanks for the thoughts :)