Michael Poyntz Poet Free verse

Thirsty Sea (Slightly Mature Content)

the indelible scent of ecstasy filled their auras
with the fragrance of lovemaking spent and
aroused passion anxious to be tasted then
devoured…skin forged on skin…a magical collaboration
of need satisfying need…moments when love
takes you far beyond reality…no limits…
no borders…nothing refused… your physical surrender
a mere formality as flesh seeks flesh…
frolicking taste-buds unlocking rivers of dreams whose
surge simply washes away the pain of loveless
droughts past …in a heartbeat forever forgotten

all resistance simply ripped away as
flame licks ice as if it were candy… mouths drawn to loins
scented by eucalyptus that once inhaled becomes
unforgettable and forevermore addictive as
the taste of warm summer honey cloaks the soul

the strength of passion is found in its gentleness
the luxury of being touched so deeply…so intimately
your soul is turned inside out…eager to respond
the relentless tongue victoriously plays hide and seek
as a master…once found you beg for the mercy of more
you are never the same again…ever…as if a thirsty
sea lay within your soul and its tide is forever restless
paradise found …over and over…emptiness abandoned
as if a decree by the gods of love…two scents becoming
one..the air you breathe forever shared…the promise of
forever scratched on your skin as if you were a trophy

Irish  ST PADDY'S DAY 2010

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Lynette Chachere March 27, 2010 at 4:47 PM such a romantic, very passionate poem.its a much more desirable, with a deep and searing sensation.this isn't overboard at all.if its this love you are writing so deeply about, then it must be an ardent thirst, for the deepest level, spirit love through the human body. wonderful poem.beautiful. i think i might favorite this. -soup mail- -Always&Forever Lynette

Carolyn Devonshire March 27, 2010 at 4:20 PM Thank you so much for your kind words on my poems today. They mean a great deal, more than you could realize and especially today. Love, Carolyn

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire March 25, 2010 at 8:49 PM Dear Michael, To some this maybe on the border but I think it is extremely Well Done My POEM "LOVE - A Letter of Intent" Pales to this Erotic write and I left a Footnote Apologizing if they found it Offendsive and no one did It's late and I have to work early but I will read YOUR other(Slightly Adult Content) I Applaude YOUR Ingenuity YOUR Liege ALWAYS ...HG

James Fraser March 25, 2010 at 3:53 PM Terrific piece Michael, i totally agree with Carolyn. This write is crafted with care, a most enjoyable read indeed >> James

Carolyn Devonshire March 25, 2010 at 11:51 AM Hi Michael, I don't think this poem steps over the line at all. Great, romantic writing~ Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts March 18, 2010 at 8:59 PM that was fantastic, it just flowed , very erotic.

Michael Poyntz March 17, 2010 at 10:28 PM Reply from irish... I am trying a new writing style where i deliberately insert a word that carries the reader automatically/in flow to the next line with out the traditional break to a new sentence. In doing this i have found the ability to open a poem wide when writing because you think in longer/more expressive terms it is a fun way to write and i will continue it. again, thanks for checking my poem out that means a lot to me!

Jessica Arteaga March 17, 2010 at 10:03 PM wow this poem had a run feel to it, each word seemed to run to the other and just keep going, lots of passion in this, good poem.