Thirsting For Her Freedom



She’s going away on a vacation!
The anxious train awaits her at the station.
Flight, is plainly not her thing.
She doesn’t want to perish,
And in pieces to God, her body bring?

It is time to leave her family behind.
Those who care for her and are so kind!
But they need not think of her anymore.
Bags, packed, she stumbles out the door.
Her vacation train leaves at past four.
 
It’s been decades since she has been free!
Actually, to her, seems like an eternity.
And what of her poetry, what will she do?
Stop all the pondering and enjoy life, too!

Will she let others know how she is doing?
I think, for once, she will be out wooing!
Romance, ah, bring it back to her in bundles!
She has been to her family, nothing but troubles.

Her Father in heaven, will watch her every step.
He has, since she the moment she was born, 
And that is, my friends, as good as it gets!

Bid her farewell, give back her wings, oh!
She’s dying for adventure, it runs in her blood.
Or...did you simply refuse to know?
                      

                      7/22/2021
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 7/22/2021 8:00:00 PM
Panagiota, Heading out into the unknown never to return home quite the same. 'Her Father in heaven, will watch her every step. He has, since she the moment she was born, ~~ And that is, my friends, as good as it gets!' A fond pair. -Richard
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Date: 7/23/2021 10:09:00 AM
Richard, always greaf to hear from you and others. Thank you for mentioning those lines...)))) love specific pointers. Very helpful to me. Not being conceited here, but those lines rock! They are filled with power. For atheists? Not so.they kneel and drool at the cross of marigolds.)))) Many thanks Pangie xoxo
Date: 7/22/2021 11:02:00 AM
With your poetic mind you can be anywhere you want, soaring like an eagle or relaxing on a beach, we have so much choice. Tom
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Date: 7/23/2021 11:23:00 AM
I wonder if those imprisoned by Nazis and Killed felt that way. Pangie xxoo
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/23/2021 10:03:00 AM
True. But I was referring to real life. Many do not even attempt greatness in the real world which is filled with Nay Sayers. One has to tell them...,get out of my way! These nay sayers out do the number of positive thinkers. Proof? Watch the news... Disgusting, negative folks. The world is ending? Not one drop of good news...the barren desert of hopelessness. Add Fake News....I loathe it... Pangie xx
Date: 7/22/2021 9:39:00 AM
We all have to fly, otherwise life is pretty dull; hope she gets her dreams. Enjoyed this well penned piece.
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Date: 7/23/2021 9:39:00 AM
Dearest ML Thank you for noting and stating this is well penned, I hope all find their wings, dreams and achieve them. They are more beautiful than a flower, they ars the sunshine of the soul. Pangie xoxd
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