Amelie Mara Poet Tanka

Thirst of Tanka

beneath glass stars
where dew of forest thirsts twice,
            a sea of roses --
reflects our kisses fueled 
            by night’s hunger; we  both burn 



Tanka(s) Contest REVISED, EASIER, more FREE
4/20/14

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Andrea Dietrich July 24, 2014 at 7:22 PM wow, another amazing one. I see this was back in April and that you had entered it into a tanka contest?? MY goodness, didn't it even get on the winner list? If not, that is a travesty!!