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THIRST FOR LOVE



My thirst for undying love I wished to quench 
Drinking from the source of your enviable lips  
Few droplets of nectar my soul was able to sip
That ample were though my craving to eclipse!



© Demetrios Trifiatis
 24 NOVEMBER 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/14/2015 10:48:00 PM
Powerfully emotive write.. I love this one!!
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Date: 12/5/2014 6:51:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful my very dear friend Demetrios! Truly enjoyed this piece! I think many of us can't ever get enough of love . I know I never do! Love is the most beautiful feeling emotion to me is realy the most pure and most worthwhile thing to have and live for than anything in this old world! Nothing equals pure love from the heart and soul, it can't be bought or realy sold no the one I am talking about, this one is really priceless! Have a lovely day! :) Love and hugs! Xxx ad.
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Date: 12/2/2014 5:54:00 PM
Absolutely love this poem. :)
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twanna Irisha
Date: 12/3/2014 8:09:00 AM
Thank you for writing an amazing piece. :)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/3/2014 7:32:00 AM
Welcome, my new friend, Twanna! Thank you so much for your kind visit and comment!
Date: 11/28/2014 9:59:00 AM
outstanding piece of writing demetrios love how this drew for me as always gold pen dear pal
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Date: 11/25/2014 11:19:00 PM
Dear Demetrios: Nicely said my friend. Can you kindly take a look at my mini epic called "The Hero - Monomyth" and let me know what you think. Thanks. All the best then. Leon.
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Date: 11/27/2014 2:50:00 AM
Leon, my friend , thank you for visiting! I will look at your poem and come back to you. It is a pleasure!
Date: 11/25/2014 2:50:00 PM
(as we walk through these paths called life, perhaps we look on for someone to glance upon and embrace a part of us) We are born alone and also die alone~
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Date: 11/25/2014 2:48:00 PM
:) expressed so vivid of emotion. Well, masterfully written. About your comment about the verse I wrote about the country life and farm. I believe it was some sort of one of my memoirs you read: You commented about your own experiences, I went back and read your words a few times without coming back to your work. You said lastly, I have to love myself. Deep within my spirituality and my heart since then I have found that. Understanding and wisdom of your writing shines;
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Date: 11/27/2014 2:53:00 AM
Happy am I that Have helped in some way dear, Cindy. Thank you for your visit and comment. Keep up the good work.
Date: 11/24/2014 3:58:00 PM
You romantic old devil! LOL A beautiful romantic epigram!
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Date: 11/24/2014 4:39:00 PM
Jack, my good friend, you know better than anyone else that a romantic heart never gets old! Look at you how young you are! Thank you my friend for your gracious visit and comment!
Date: 11/24/2014 3:31:00 PM
The greatest gift -- undying love . . . it's not in the quantity of the love but in the purity of the love . . . you have drank deeply of this pure love and shared it with us! lovely my dear friend.
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Date: 11/24/2014 4:41:00 PM
Excellent dear, David! Thank you for your precious visit and comment!
Date: 11/24/2014 2:50:00 PM
Beautifully expressed!
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Date: 11/24/2014 4:42:00 PM
Thank you, Faye, for your lovely visit and comment!
Date: 11/24/2014 1:54:00 PM
Very sensuous...hits right at the core of longing for love...Tim
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Date: 11/24/2014 4:43:00 PM
One understands something in the degree he has experienced it, my good friend, Tim! Thank you!
Date: 11/24/2014 12:04:00 PM
oohh dripping with romance Demetrios - this is divine;-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/24/2014 4:45:00 PM
With so many lovely ladies around how could anyone remain immune to romance, dear Jan? xx
Date: 11/24/2014 7:55:00 AM
What a deep wanton feeling.How beautiful!Charma
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Date: 11/24/2014 10:42:00 AM
Certain am I that your understanding of it is deep, my dear friend, Charma! Thank you!
Date: 11/24/2014 7:49:00 AM
This is so passionate Demetrios! Loved ur epigram of great substance! Hv all Doubts if it cud quench, it wud rather set craving for more !!
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Date: 11/24/2014 10:37:00 AM
Dr. Upma, sometimes, when we are having strong feelings for someone we so much wish to be with, we would rather have some droplets of that person's feelings than a whole jar of somebody else's. Here in this poem, I wished to show how precious her feelings are for me! Thank you so much for visiting and commenting. It is always a pleasure!
Date: 11/24/2014 6:48:00 AM
Oh, my dear poet...the few droplets should not be able to quench but should serve to heighten the desire for more! ;) Depends on the lips! ;) I love to tease you. May I? Filakia...
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Date: 11/24/2014 10:32:00 AM
You are so right my dear poetess,few droplets should not be able to quench but should serve to heighten the desire, unless of course, those droplets come from ...divine lips then even one droplet quench the thirst! I like being teased dear, Eileen! Thank you for visiting and commenting. Much appreciated!
Date: 11/24/2014 6:21:00 AM
- A hug warms, and a kiss open the door of love - Beautiful poem dear Demetrios ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/24/2014 10:38:00 AM
Absolutely dear, Anne-Lise! Thank you for your kind visit!
Date: 11/24/2014 3:52:00 AM
Wow!Wow!my dear friend Demetrios, you're very romantic today. Lol Very beautiful romantic epigram! Enjoyed! A 7 from me! Have a lovely week! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Date: 11/24/2014 10:41:00 AM
Thank you very much dear, Dorian, for your gentle comment and your generous grading! BTW I am always romantic, just sometimes reality claims my pen for a day or two!