Third Degree Gurns

I do this each year, usually November
The box is heavier than I remember
I lift off the lid, inhale the odour
First it's the Yardley my Dad used to wear
A giant birthday card, a 21st treat
Hides the treasures I buried beneath
A removal of this, I'm suddenly there
Back to a time of no worries or cares
Silly old letters, words of love lost
Old theatre scripts, a small diamond cross
Cheesy song lyrics, wrote with intention
of giving. Your marriage my only prevention
I kept every one, to preserve memories
That many moons ago, you belonged to me
There's cinema tickets, ragged and spoiled
You gave your last Rolo so I kept the foil
A white envelope that smells of your house
A severe difference between then and now
And then comes the photo's I squirreled away
Why do I torture myself in this way?
Snapshots of people I forgot I knew
Of parties and whitey's and hullabaloo
Those LSD nights, third degree gurns
Burdenless shoulders, pink with sunburn
A dog-earred schoolbook covered in doodles
Traditional student living on noodles
Chases from police with weed in the car
Walking to the beach in shorts and a bra
Tokens and proof of infinate liberty
But for now, for another year, I put the lid back on me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/27/2013 8:07:00 PM
Jodie... CONGRATULATIONS... in ANTHONY'S "Treasure Chest" contest.. enjoying your awesome win. ***LINDA***
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Date: 9/24/2013 4:05:00 AM
congrats on win Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/23/2013 10:29:00 PM
lovely poem Jodie. love ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/23/2013 6:09:00 PM
enjoyed the trip with you down memory lane...nicely penned...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/10/2012 3:44:00 AM
Yes I will be the first to comment your poem Jodie!! Nice poem!! Hugs - Laila
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