Thinking of You

rambunctious child 
my gift to you is silence
candlelight dinner 


5/20/2018

Inspired my granddaughter's quote to her mother on her birthday.
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Breidenthal Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 4:58 AM
(: inspiration is a bloom in the spring or summertime. It blossoms blessedly. Such a nice poem. -JWE
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 3:23 PM
Cute one. as long as the gift is for the mother and not the child!
Salehi Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Smart lady...
Vaso Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 12:07 AM
Just so very well said! hugs!
Warrior Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 6:40 AM
Kids today are amazing...and so is your Senryu...love and light...^WW^
Malik Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 6:08 AM
Sweet <3
Gupta Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 1:25 AM
Strikingly significant twist ... Nicely done ...
Allison Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 4:31 PM
what a fascinating quote Eve, I'd love to know full the story behind these words:-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Most children are boisterous and active, Eve. They have a lot of energy to burn, but there are times when they know how to behave like grown-ups, too! Hope the candlelight dinner was well enjoyed:) Hugs // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Very sweet!
Wanter Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 11:41 AM
So sweet. I wonder about the quote that inspired it.
Faulkner Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Something sad and sweet in this, very touching-
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