Thinking In Circles

I walk quickly in circles without hurry
Thinking in panic without thought or worry
As rain hammers down from clear blue skies
Soaking me to the skin; leaving me bone dry
I cross a road without progressing
Whilst rushing slowly to keep from digressing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Taylor Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 4:30 PM
Congrats on your HM, Jenni. Nice going. xxxRalph
Sweetheart Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 5:03 PM
Congrats Jennie on HM with this wonderful write luv..
Johnson Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 4:30 PM
Intriguing thoughts. Thoughts do go in circles and back and forth and slowly and quickly sometimes. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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October 5, 2011 at 3:44 PM
I like the original style of this Jenni..and congratulations on your H M..
Brown Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 7:05 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "October-Your Choice" contest Jenni. Love, Carol
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September 21, 2011 at 7:54 AM
Interesting thoughts penned..Enjoyed..Sara
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